Please could somebody check or improve my essay. my English isn't very good.

thanks.

prompt.- Write a brief biographical sketch about yourself.
Limit your response to 300 words.

I was born in (city), (country), on (month day year). When I was a child, every thing around me caught my curiosity. I always wondered why something happens, or why other thing has a particular shape, and I asked my parents until they got no answers.

I have a very integrated and lovely family. My parents are from (country), they have taught me not only (country) language, but also good moral and traditions. I love listening (country traditional) tales, because they are quite interesting and contain very deep thoughts. From each story I heard, I have learn a lesson for life, to distinguish what is good and what is bad.

In the school, I was specially interested in mathematic, physic and chemistry. Through those subject I could find answers to my childhood’s questions. While other parents force their children to study, my parents made me to have fun, of course, without missing the homework. But for a strange reason, the less pressure gave me my parents, the more responsible I became. I remember once my math teacher gave us 150 equation exercises for homework, and 150 long exercises is too much to finish in just one day, so, I began solving exercises right after I had arrived home. and I have done 135 exercises at midnight. But I still had 15 to finish. In that moment my father asked me: ”Do you need help?”. I answered: “thanks, but I will finish all”, he reply “ Don’t stay too late or you won’t get up on time for school.”. I said “Don’t worry, I’ll set 3 alarms”. So, I kept working until I finished the home work.

As no human is perfect, I also have some defects. One of them is that I’m too perfectionist, I want every thing impeccable. So, I waste too much time planning than doing something. But I am confident that I will transform all my weakness into strength, and looking always to be better than yesterday.
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everything is one word
another thing or other things
had no more answers
morals
listening to
have learned
in school
mathematics, physics
those subjects
childhood questions
make someone have

my homework
the less my parents pressured me
so I
after I arrived
I did 135 by midnight
At that moment
he replied
stay up
more... than
always look
Thank you very much for checking my essay. Could you please give me some suggestion to improve my essay? I am applying for a US college.
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Hi, here is the fixed essay.

Please some suggestion. Thanks.

I was born in (city), (country), on month day year. When I was a child, everything around me roused my curiosity. I always wondered why something happens, or why other things have a particular shape. And I asked my parents until they had no more answers.

I have a very integrated and lovely family. My parents are from (country), they have taught me not only (country) language, but also good morals and traditions. I love listening (country traditional) tales, because they are fairly interesting and contain very deep thoughts. From each story I heard, I have learned a lesson for life.

In school, I was specially interested in mathematics, physics and chemistry. Through those subjects I could find answers to my childhood questions. While other parents force their children to study, my parents made me have fun, of course, without missing my homework. But for a strange reason, the less my parents pressure me, the more responsible I became. I remember once my math teacher gave us 150 equation exercises for homework, and 150 long exercises is too much to finish in just one day, so I began solving exercises right after I arrived home. I have done 135 by midnight, but I still had 15 to finish. At that moment my father asked me: ”Do you need help?”. I answered: “Thanks, but I will finish all”. He replied “ Don’t stay up too late or you won’t get up on time for school.” I said “Don’t worry, I’ll set 3 alarms”. So, I kept working until I finished the home work.

As no human is perfect, I also have some defects. One of them is that I’m too perfectionist, I want every thing impeccable. So, I waste more time planning than doing something. But I am sure that I will transform all my weakness into strength by hardwork and perseverance. I will always look to be better than yesterday.
You didn't fix all the points I indicated, but it is better. Please review carefully the list I gave you previously.

The main structural problem with this essay is that the second paragraph is an isolated and out-of-place idea, unrelated to the paragraphs before and after it. I would suggest that you put the second paragraph first (along with the 'birth' sentence), and then write of your childhood curiosity in the second paragraph, thus leading in to your education experience in the third.
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Thank you very much Mister Micawber for your suggestion, I will improve my essay now.
Here is the edited version.

Please some advice to enhance my essay. Thanks.

My birth took place on -- -- --, in ----, ----. It is my fortune to have an integrated and lovely family. My parents are from ----, they have taught me not only ---- language, but also good morals and traditions. I love listening to ---- traditional tales, from each story I heard; I have learned an important lesson.

When I was a child, everything around me roused my curiosity. I always wondered why something happens, or why another thing has a particular shape. And I asked my parents until they had no more answers.

In school, I was especially interested in mathematics, physics and chemistry. Through those subjects I could find answers to my childhood questions. While other parents force their children to study, my parents made me have fun, of course, without missing my homework. But for a strange reason, the less my parents pressure me, the more responsible I became. I remember once my math teacher gave us 150 equation exercises for homework, and 150 long exercises is too much to finish in just one day, so I began working right after I arrived home. I did 135 by midnight, but I still had 15 to finish. At that moment my father asked me: ”Do you need help?” I answered: “thanks, but I will finish all”. He replied: “ Don’t stay up too late or you won’t get up on time for school.” I said “Don’t worry, I’ll set 3 alarms”. So, I kept working until I finished the homework.

As no human is perfect, I also have some defects. One of them is that I’m too perfectionist; I want every thing impeccable. So, I waste more time planning than doing something. But I am sure that I will transform all my weakness into strength by hard work and perseverance. I will always look to be better than yesterday.