I would like to thank all my XX colleagues after having my training in XX. It was a fruitful training. Would you please help me to correct the following letter? Thank you.

Dear all,



Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training. The training was well organized and the experienced professors gave the courses lively. After the training, I have a better view on XX industry, the structure of our company, our resources and XX service. I really enjoyed myself during the training; you are all very kind for me. I will do my best not to disappoint you and be an asset for our company.

Thanks & Best regards



Penelope
Hi Penelope-- welcome to English Forums.

Dear all,

Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training. The program was well organized and the experienced professors made the courses lively. After the training, I have a better view of the *** industry, the structure of our company, and our resources and *** service. I really enjoyed myself during the experience; you were all very kind to me. I will do my best not to disappoint you and be an asset to our company.

Thanks and best regards,

You did a fine job-- all I did was change a few little words and the word training. For good style, try not to use the same word repeatedly, but find synonyms for it: training /program/course/experience/exercise etc.
hi my dear mom, how are you? hope u r keeping well. hope is your life going on? how is your preaching in nepal?hope u r feeling satisfaction by preaching in nepal.i am very happy to hear all the news of u from anirban. you r really enjoying a lot by keeping serving to jah always.this is what i feel very much encouragement from u. pl keep it up always. perhaps it is your seed in nepal, that is what jah has helped u to do your work successfully.i heard from someone that there is no hope for your coming to bangalore. never mind. i am very happy that u r feeling comfortable there in nepal by preaching alot, give a lot of praises to jah.

oh forget to tell u, yes i have got your mail. wow your mail is really encouraging me a lot..i am feeling much better after reading your mail. now i am going to read bible and many others books in order to gain my knowledge, so that i can be firm and stand for jah when i get a lot of trouble from my parents and many others too .pl keep on mailing me to encourage me a lot because now i am feeling weak in spirituality.not have been processed in my spirituality at all because of not having bible study since u had left for nepal.anyway now i have decided to have bible study with rajesh and now on i am going to study with him. but still i am feeling that i'd like to have studyonly with u,not any else because u r my most favourite teacher. u can solve any of my problems and many more. i always depend on u because u always encourage me whenever i am feeling weak in spirituality, not others. even i got truth only from u.missing u lots my dearest..

anyway last 3 weeks we anirban, quenie and i went out for shopping,restaurant, and museum. we had a nice time with each others. oh let u know that i have passed the board examx and got second class marks.

anyway missing u lots...mail me soon my dear

ur loving spiritual son

varun
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Hello,

Firstly go through and fix the sloppy stuff and then we'll take a proper look. If you want to improve your English then you have to write in English not 'text'. Fix these and re-post

You not u

I not i

are not r

please not pl

etc etc etc

Also, you should use a capital letter at the start of all sentences and for proper nouns, like your own name.

Content-wise this is a nice chatty letter. You can still keep that informal tone without resorting to text-talk!
Welcome to English Forums, Varun.

Yes, as Nona says, please review your letter yourself first, to repair the simpler errors.