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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the Master’s Degree in Management in which I am particularly interested.

“Far and away the best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing”, said Theodore Roosevelt. I came to understand that if I had clear goals and worked hard, I could clarify my own vision and direct the path of my life. There are many projects I have for myself in the future, and going to *** is one of them.

This Fall I successfully completed my Bachelor degree in Financial and Banking in ***.With an excellent standing where I am the top student in Financial and banking sciences as well as the top student in the Faculty for that year.



I want to obtain a Master's Degree in Management. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand management principles. With all the uncertainty and changes in with world, political, economic, and technological, I believe that management must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to guide companies through these challenging times.

The love for wisdom and knowledge is equivalent to my passion on continuous study. My passion and love for management motivates me to further take more precise and challenging pursuits. Yes, I may say I have enough to share but such knowledge may no longer applicable in the time being, hence, the need of continuous studying and learning is crucial in this present time. Knowledge is subject to expiration and continuous update and learning new things
is needed.

Thank you very much for considering me for the scholarship, and I am looking forward to hearing from you.



Sincerely yours,

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Hi,

I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly spaced A4. The most important thing to remember is that this may be your only opportunity to sell yourself to the admissions tutor. And it's also worth bearing in mind that it’s a double edged sword – while a great supporting statement will impress, a poor personal statement will damage your chances of success.

Why this subject? Ideally you should sum up your feelings for a subject in a short, snappy sentence. You need to really capture the reason why you are interested in the subject.

Why you? You will need to show that you would be a good student and are suited to the subject you have chosen.

Are you interesting? What experiences have you had that would bring something extra to the university community

This is just a brief answer to your question. Check out this interesting article on writing university supporting statements .

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Daniel
Hi,

I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly spaced A4. The most important thing to remember is that this may be your only opportunity to sell yourself to the admissions tutor. And it's also worth bearing in mind that it’s a double edged sword – while a great supporting statement will impress, a poor personal statement will damage your chances of success.

Why this subject? Ideally you should sum up your feelings for a subject in a short, snappy sentence. You need to really capture the reason why you are interested in the subject.

Why you? You will need to show that you would be a good student and are suited to the subject you have chosen.

Are you interesting? What experiences have you had that would bring something extra to the university community

This is just a brief answer to your question. Check out this interesting article on writing university supporting statements .

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Daniel
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the Master’s Degree in Management in which I am particularly interested.

“Far and away the best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing”, said Theodore Roosevelt. I came to understand that if I had clear goals and worked hard, I could clarify my own vision and direct the path of my life. There are many projects I have for myself in the future, and going to****is one of them.

This Fall I successfully completed my Bachelor degree in Financial and Banking in the **** .With an excellent standing where I am the top student in Financial and banking sciences as well as the top student in the Faculty for that year. I am an ambitious person and I keep going on until I achieve my goals , I never give up , and if I fall down , I stand and start again . To achieve a goal you can't stand there waiting for what you want to come to you , you have to work hard to achieve it , and that’s what I am doing , I want to achieve the highest degrees to get what I want . And what I want is to have my own business and manage it all the way to the top and succeed.

I want to obtain a Master's Degree in Management. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand management principles. With all the uncertainty and changes in with world, political, economic, and technological, I believe that management must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to guide companies through these challenging times.

The love for wisdom and knowledge is equivalent to my passion on continuous study. My passion and love for management motivates me to further take
more precise and challenging pursuits. Yes, I may say I have enough to share
but such knowledge may no longer applicable in the time being, hence, the need
of continuous studying and learning is crucial in this present time.
Knowledge is subject to expiration and continuous update and learning new things
is needed.

Thank you very much for considering me for the scholarship .


Sincerely yours,
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