Please!! I Need A Phrase Revised Urgently?

it sounds good to me! wait for further confirmation though.

Thanks a lot!

"we will certainly increase our knowledge as we meet the challenges.We should be observantin order to accomplish our goals".

I hope I am right

Hi,
"we will certainly increase our knowledge as we meet the challenges.We should be observantin order to accomplish our goals".
"We will certainly increase our knowledge as we meet the challenges. We should be observant in order to accomplish our goals".

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"we will certainly increase our knowledge as we meet the challenges.We should be observant, in order to accomplish our goals".

I hope Iam right

Hi Nsosaz

The word "be" is not correctly used in your sentence. And the combination "as we ... are observant" does not work either.
In addition, "are observant" does not combine well with "meet challenges" and "accomplish goals" (a problem with parallel structure). So, I recommend rewording your sentence a bit.

Here is a suggestion for a possible quick repair:

- We will certainly increase our knowledge as we meet challenges, observe details, and accomplish goals.