Q: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.

What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

A: Nowadays, a major concern of the environment is rivers, lakes and oceans are polluted. This is a big task for people whose purpose is protecting the environment. This problem can be caused by many sources and the consequences it brings to human society and animals is very large.

To begin with, there are a large number of factors responsible for polluting rivers, lakes, and seas. Firstly, harmful substances and chemicals from factories are poured directly into the water, making it impossible to live. Secondly, in some countries are not having a waste-treatment system, people have to throw garbage into the sea as a solution for the inability of handling waste.

Because of the severity of water pollution in rivers, lakes and seas, many unprecedented effects have appeared on animals and people. For example, many aquatic animals would not lose their habitat unless their living areas are contaminated. Moreover, people in some places depending on waters on rivers, lakes and seas may struggle from the lack of fresh water, which plays a vital role in their lives. As a result, water pollution affects animals and people's lives seriously in both accommodating and feeding aspects.

In conclusion, factories and people take the responsibility of harming water sources that destroy animals' habitats as well as influencing citizens' lives nearby.

Q: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.

What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

A:

Nowadays, a major concern of the environment is rivers, lakes and oceans are polluted. This is a big task for people whose purpose is protecting the environment. This problem can be caused by many sources and the consequences it brings to human society and animals is very large.

To begin with, there are a large number of factors responsible for polluting rivers, lakes, and seas. Firstly, harmful substances and chemicals from factories are poured directly into the water, making it impossible to live. Secondly, in some countries are not having a waste-treatment system, people have to throw garbage into the sea as a solution for the inability of handling waste.

Because of the severity of water pollution in rivers, lakes and seas, many unprecedented effects have appeared on animals and people. For example, many aquatic animals would not lose their habitat unless their living areas are contaminated. Moreover, people in some places depending on waters on rivers, lakes and seas may struggle from the lack of fresh water, which plays a vital role in their lives. As a result, water pollution affects animals and people's lives seriously in both accommodating and feeding aspects.

In conclusion, factories and people take the responsibility of harming water sources that destroy animals' habitats as well as influencing citizens' lives nearby.

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Nowadays, a major concern of the environment is rivers, lakes and oceans are polluted. This is a big task (You did not mention any task. ) It poses major clean-up efforts for people whose purpose is protecting the environment. This problem can be caused by industry, large cities and even farmers many sources (be more specific) and the consequences it brings such as fish kills and contaminated drinking water threaten not only life on the planet, but future human civilization. to human society and animals is very large. (The ideal thesis statement gives a hint to the examiner about your argument points in the body paragraphs. It creates a wonderful transition to your first body paragraph.)

To begin with, there are a large number of factors (wrong word) sources responsible for polluting rivers, lakes, and seas. First, Firstly, harmful substances and chemicals from factories are poured directly into the water, making it impossible for species of fish to survive. to live. Secondly, (Give an example of some company that has been a bad actor.) Second, in some countries are not having (wrong verb form) a waste-treatment system, (comma splice error) people have to throw garbage into the sea as a solution for the inability of handling waste. Better: Second, in countries without a waste-treatment system, raw sewage is released into local rivers, which flows into the seas and oceans. Also plastic and other waste finds its way from landfills into the waterways.

Because of th The severity of water pollution in rivers, lakes and seas is associated with many adverse effects , many unprecedented effects have appeared on animals and people. For example, many aquatic animals would not lose their habitat unless their living areas are contaminated. (That makes no sense.) Moreover, people in some places depending on waters on from rivers, lakes and seas may struggle from the lack of fresh water, which plays a vital role in their lives. As a result, water pollution affects animals and people's lives seriously in both accommodating and feeding aspects.
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In conclusion, factories and people take the responsibility of harming water sources that destroy animals' habitats as well as influencing citizens' lives nearby.