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The Brave Eaglet

1. Once upon a time a loving couple of eagles built a nest on the top of a high cliff.
2. They were happy and looked forward
3. To their three baby eaglets to hatch out.
4. After some time, the eaglets began to crack through their shells.
5. At first, only two little brothers came out. The third one took his time.
6. The parents began to worry,
7. But then there was a crackle…
8. And the third eaglet hatched out! They called him Rafael.
9. The family was happy beyond all measure!
10. The baby eaglets were so cute!
11. The days passed, the eaglets grew and it was time for them to learn how to fly.
12. The parents taught the fledglings how to flap their wings, and the eaglets sat on the edge of the nest and watched curiously.
13. The elder brothers flew up towards their parents.
14. Now it was Rafael’s turn. But when he looked down
15. He got scared of the height.
16. And stepped back in doubt.
17. Rafael looked up
18. And saw his family hovering in the sky.
19. But he still was scared.
20. Suddenly, Rafael noticed something in the distance.
21. A beautiful butterfly flew towards him.
22. She approached and sat on the edge of the nest.
Rafael was enchanted with her beauty and couldn’t take his eyes off her.
23. Then they started playing together,
and soon the eaglet forgot that he was afraid to fly.
24. But the butterfly could not stay too long with Rafael and had to fly forth.
25. Rafael followed her with his eyes and realized
26. That if he didn’t overcome his fear right away he would never learn to fly.
27. He closed his eyes, took a deep breath,
28. Stood on the edge of the nest, flapped his wings and…
29. Flew!
30. When Rafael realized that he was flying, easily and freely,
his heart filled with joy.
31. Now, the whole family was hovering high up in the sky and everybody was happy! And Rafael learned that self-belief works wonders!
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1. Once upon a time a loving pair of eagles built a nest on the top of a high cliff, and the female eagle laid three eggs.
2. They were happy and looked forward
3. To their three baby eaglets hatching.
4. After some time, the eaglets began to crack through their shells.
5. At first, only two little brothers came out. The third one took his time.
6. The parents began to worry,
7. But then there was a crackle…
8. And the third eaglet hatched! They called him Rafael.
9. The family was happy beyond all measure!
10. The baby eaglets were so cute!
11. The days passed, the eaglets grew, and it was time for them to learn how to fly.
12. The parents taught the fledglings how to flap their wings.
12a. The eaglets sat on the edge of the nest and watched curiously.
13. The elder brothers flew up towards their parents.
14. Now it was Rafael’s turn. But when he looked down
15. He got scared of the height and stepped back in doubt.
17. Rafael looked up
18. And saw his family hovering in the sky, but he still was scared.
20. Suddenly, Rafael noticed something in the distance.
21. A beautiful butterfly flew towards him.
22. She approached and sat on the edge of the nest.
22a. Rafael was enchanted with her beauty and couldn’t take his eyes off her.
23. Then they started playing together, and soon the eaglet forgot that he was afraid to fly.
24. But the butterfly could not stay too long with Rafael and flew away.
25. Rafael followed her with his eyes and realized
26. That if he didn’t overcome his fear right away he would never learn to fly.
27. He closed his eyes, took a deep breath, stood on the edge of the nest, flapped his wings and—flew!
30. When Rafael realized that he was flying, easily and freely,his heart filled with joy.
31. Now, the whole family was hovering high up in the sky and everybody was happy!
32. And Rafael learned that self-confidence works wonders!