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Please read the following and make any suggestion if there needs to be any corrections made with regard to the arranment of words or if you think anything should be omitted:

I am currently in the process of obtaining my certification for fitness training through a professional and renowned academic fitness organization...
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I am currently in the process of obtaining my certification for fitness training through a respected professional fitness school.

('Academic organization' = 'school'. 'Renowned' is rather pompous for such an organization.)
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