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I’ve just finished reading a really good book. What kinds of thing do you enjoy reading? Do you prefer books or magazines? Tell me something about a famous writer from your country.

Thanks for your letter. I'm happy to hear that you read a good book and so do I. I have just read "The Ugly Duckling", the story of Andersen.

The transformation from the ugly to the better of main character in this book made me attractive a lot. And I enjoy everything about reading. In my opinion, it's the best way to relax or get more information to help your knowledge improved.

I think reading better than spending all time playing games or sitting in front of the TV. To me, I prefer books to magazines because books contain loads of things I've ever knowns. And let me share with you a famous writer in my country I lived. This is "Nguyen Nhat Anh". He is considered to be one of Vietnam's most successful for teenagers. His work is very attractive to readers, both adult and children. If you interested in romantic, I think you should read his stories, you won't be disappointed.

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Thanks for your letter. (The instructions do not mention a letter. Write your paragraph or essay according to the instructions. ) I'm happy to hear that you read a good book and so do I. (Incorrect grammar.
You are reading a good book, and so am I.
You have read a good book, and so have I.
You read a good book, and so did I.)

I have just read "The Ugly Duckling", the story of Andersen. (Was the duckling named Anderson? "Story of a Happy Man" = the story is about a happy man. )

The transformation from the ugly to the better of the main character in this book made me attractive (How can a story make you look better?) a lot. And I enjoy everything about reading. In my opinion, it's the best way to relax or get more information to help your knowledge improved. (wrong grammar)

I think reading is better than spending all your time playing games or sitting in front of the TV. To me, I prefer books to magazines because books contain loads of things I've ever (wrong word) knowns. (wrong form) And let me share with you some information about a famous writer (You are not going to share the writer, are you?) in my country I lived. (wrong expression. the country where I live / my country.) This is "Nguyen Nhat Anh". He is considered to be one of Vietnam's most successful (successful is an adjective. You need a noun to follow.) for teenagers. His work is very attractive to readers, both adult (wrong form) and children. If you interested (wrong grammar) in romantic, (romantic is an adjective. You need a noun to follow.) I think you should read his stories, (Comma splice error, wrong punctuation, ungrammatical sentence. you won't be disappointed.