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Nowadays, radio is being replaced by TV and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with idea?

21st century is a technology based era. Majority of people use tv, internet, ipad and other device for entertainment but still many people like radio. This essay looks at both side of this topic.

Defiantly tv and the internet are more vast than radio. These provide more enjoyment as we can see many type of programs on tv as compare to radio. Also, audio and video impact look more beautiful just than audio. Today tv signal comes in high definition which makes the audio and video quality more impressive.Big reason fof replacement is that tv and internet give more facilities than the radio. Many people think that these devices make this world one country.

Many people believe that the radio is not the thing of past.
According to research, old people love to listen radio as their eye side is weak in this age. Furthermore, most persons at driving time prefer to hear music or other program on the radio because it diverts less concentration from road and also, give more fun. The radio industry in world also growing day by day as there are no. of radio channel in globe as compare to past. Another plus point of radio is that it is cheaper and has small size which makes its market in world.

In my opinion, the radio will gain popularity in future but no as much as tv and the internet. In future ,the radio will never completely replace by these because radio has its own advantages.
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The 21st century is a technology-based era. Majority of people use TV, internet, ipad and other devices for entertainment, but still many people like radio. This essay looks at both sides of this topic.

Defiantly tv and the internet are more vast (? This is ambiguous) than radio. These provide more enjoyment as we can see many type of programs on tv as compared to radio. Also, audio and video images impact look more beautiful just than audio. Today tv signals comes in high definition which makes the audio and video quality more impressive. A Big reason fof replacement (replacement of what?) is that tv and internet give more facilities (? This is ambiguous) than the radio. Many people think that these devices make this world one country.

Many people believe that the radio is not a thing of the past.
According to research (reference?) , old people love to listen radio as their eye side is weak in this age. Furthermore, most persons when they drive at driving time prefer to hear music or other programs on the radio because it diverts less attention concentration from road and also, gives more fun. The radio industry in the world is also growing day by day as there are no. (number?) of radio channels in globe as compared to the past. Another plus point of radio is that it is cheaper and has a small size which makes its market (?) in world.

In my opinion, the radio will gain popularity in the future but not as much as tv and the internet. In future , the radio will never completely replace by these because radio has its own advantages.
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