With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

There has been declining to tend of physical books nowadays because of the growing popularity of digital reading. There are both benefits and drawbacks to this tendency, as will now be presented.

On the one hand, the domination of books in digital formats benefits both environmentally and economically. First, with the emerge of E-books, no manufacturing paper is required so logging trees in the forest in order to produce paper become the thing of the past. Chances are a lot of resources would be saved and polluting paper are scaled-down. Second, as the increasing ability of E-content is available on the Internet, this spares readers from incurring an astronomical cost to spend on physical books. Students are in a strong position to read a genre of books with small fees or even it is free to access.

On the other hand, the exponential growth of digital reading is not without pitfalls. Reading in e-book reader or tablet, people are subject to be bombarded with notification of the social media. Facebook constantly send the notices which are about their friend’s status or outstanding events that would make them get distracted in the book they are reading online. Furthermore, these day copyright infringement is more rampant meaning that books are widespread without the permission of its authors. That way, the writers would get nothing in return, that would demotivate them continue writing books.

In conclusion, the switch away from paper-based books to the online version is evitable. Despite some advantages associated with this development, its glaring disadvantages cannot be denied.

(1)Reading is a popular pastime. However, there has been declining to tend of(2) physical books nowadays(3) because of the growing popularity of digital reading. There are both benefits and drawbacks to this tendency(4), as will now be explained below. presented.

On the one hand, the domination increasing availability of books in digital formats benefits both the environment ally and the economy.(5) ically. First, with the emergence of e-books, no manufacturing less paper is required, so logging trees in the forest in order to produce paper has become the a thing of the past(6). Chances are This means a lot of natural resources would be saved and polluting pollution from paper waste are is scaled down(7). Second, as the increasing ability of E-content is available on the Internet, this e-books spares readers from incurring an astronomical cost to spend on are cheaper than physical books.

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1- You need a sentence to introduce the topic to the reader. Try also to include some background, if you can.

2- That’s unnatural. Use simple expressions and focus on the ideas, not the words.

3- Avoid using “nowadays” with the present perfect.

4- Wrong word; “tendency” is used with behaviour or action.

5- I think you meant to say something like “the increasing availability of books in digital formats has both environmental and economic benefits”.

6- That is not true. Trees are still cut down to make paper. The rate may have decreased, but it has not stopped.

7- There was no need for the hyphen there. The hyphen would only be needed if “scaled down” is used as an adjective, for example “a scaled-down model of the house”.

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There has been declining number of to tend of (wrong usage) physical books published nowadays because of the growing popularity of digital reading. There are both benefits and drawbacks to this tendency, as will now be presented.

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On the one hand, the domination of books in digital formats benefits us both environmentally and economically. First, with the emerge of E-books, (wrong usage) no manufacturing print paper is required so logging trees in the forest in order to produce paper become (wrong form) the a thing of the past. Chances are a lot of resources would be saved and polluting paper are scaled-down. (This is very poor English. It makes no sense. ) Second, as an the increasing amount ability of E-content is available on the Internet, this spares readers from incurring an astronomical the cost of to spend on physical books. Students are in a strong position to read a genre of books with small fees or even it is for free to access.

On the other hand, the exponential growth of digital reading is not without pitfalls. Reading on an in e-book reader or tablet, people are subject to be bombarded with advertising or messages from notification of the social media. Facebook constantly sends the notices which are about their friend’s friends' status or outstanding events that would make them get distracted in them from the book they are reading online. Furthermore, these day copyright infringement is more rampant meaning that books are distributed widespread without the permission of its the authors. That way, the writers would get nothing in return, that would demotivate them from continuing to write e writing books.

In conclusion, the switch away from paper-based books to the online version is inevitable. evitable. Despite some advantages associated with this development, its glaring disadvantages cannot be denied.

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With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Today, physical books are gradually left behind because of the growing popularity of digital reading. While there are some obvious merits related to this tendency, these are eclipsed by the drawbacks.

On the one hand, the domination of books in digital formats benefits in both environmental and economic purposes. First, the emergence of E-books can help protect the environment. The significant decrease of paper production leads to a low rate of logging trees because no print paper is required. Second, as an increasing amount of e-content is available on the Internet, this spares readers from incurring the cost of physical books. Students are in a strong position to read books with small fees or even for free.

On the other hand, the exponential growth of digital reading is not without pitfalls. Reading on an e-book reader or tablet, people are subject to be bombarded with advertising or messages from social media. Facebook constantly sends notices about their friends' status or outstanding events that would distract them from the book they are reading online. Furthermore, these days copyright infringement is rampant meaning that books are distributed without the permission of the authors. That way, the writers would get nothing in return, that would demotivate them from continuing to write books.

In conclusion, the switch away from paper-based books to the online version is inevitable. Despite some advantages associated with this development, its glaring disadvantages cannot be denied.

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With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

There has been a declining number of physical books published because of the growing popularity of digital reading. While there are some obvious merits related to this tendency, these are eclipsed by the drawbacks.

On the one hand, the domination of books in digital formats benefits both in the environment and the economy. First, with the emergence of e-books, less paper is required, so the frequency of logging trees in order to produce paper, in all probability, is significantly decreased to the low rate. This means a lot of natural resources would be saved and pollution from paper waste is scaled down. Second, as an increasing amount of e-content is available on the Internet, this spares readers from incurring the cost of physical books. Students are in a strong position to read books with small fees or even for free.

On the other hand, the exponential growth of digital reading is not without pitfalls. Reading on an e-book reader or tablet, people are subject to be bombarded with advertising or messages from social media. Facebook constantly sends notices about their friends' status or outstanding events that would distract them from the book they are reading online. Furthermore, these days copyright infringement is rampant meaning that books are distributed without the permission of the authors. That way, the writers would get nothing in return, that would demotivate them from continuing to write books.

In conclusion, the switch away from paper-based books to the online version is inevitable. Despite some advantages associated with this development, its glaring disadvantages cannot be denied.

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There has been a decline in the ing number of physical books published because of the growing popularity of digital reading. While there are some obvious merits related to this trend, tendency, these are eclipsed by the drawbacks.

On the one hand, the domination of books in digital formats benefits both in the environment and the economy. First, with the emergence of e-books, less paper is required, so the frequency of logging of trees in order to produce paper, in all probability, is significantly decreased. to the low rate. This means a lot of natural resources would be saved and pollution from paper waste is scaled down. Second, as an the increasing amount of e-content is available on the Internet this spares readers from incurring the cost of physical books. Moreover, students are in a strong position to read buy books with small fees at low prices or even for free.

On the other hand, the exponential growth of digital reading is not without its pitfalls. Reading on an e-book reader or tablet, people are subject to be bombarded with advertising or unsolicited messages from social media. Facebook constantly sends notices about their friends' status or outstanding special events that would distract them from the book they are reading online. Furthermore, these days copyright infringement is rampant, meaning that books are distributed without the permission of the authors. That way, the writers would get nothing in return, and that would demotivate them from continuing to write books.

In conclusion, the switch away from paper-based books to the online digital versions has economic and environmental benefits, but it can also mean reader privacy is impacted and copyright is more difficult to protect. is inevitable(1). Despite some advantages associated with this development, its glaring disadvantages cannot be denied.

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1- Do not introduce new information/discussion in the conclusion. Just summarize the main findings from your body paragraphs.

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