Question: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay:

It is believed by some people that conventional newspapers will continue to be the major source of news no matter how many people are accessing the Internet to search for information. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this belief.

There are several compelling reasons why online news has seen an enormous increase in popularity. First, since ,in this digital age, the Internet can provide people with up-to-the-minute news as it happens, it is a more convenient and faster way to read news. For example, there are a large number of online websites like CNN which offer readers access to the latest news 24 hours a day everyday. Second, by possessing a smarphone or a laptop, they can instantly go online and read the news of their choices from all over the world. It means that they donot have to go out to buy newspapers, which helps save their time for more important tasks.

By contrast, newspapers' obvious drawbacks are making them a less common news source. The major reason for this is their cost. Since there is a variety of freely available news on the Internet, newspapers publishers are now facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Consequently, even some famous publishers such as The Guardian or The New York Times have to resort to online news alongside with the conventional ones to make profits. Another reason for this downward trend is environmental issues. There is a body of public opinion who rejects buying newspapers because their production relates to deforestation. As a result, newspapers are intensively losing their popularity.

In conclusion, due to the convenience of online news, I think that newspapers are set to become less favourable.

[ 1] Newspapers have been around with us for over a century. [ 2] Until recently, many people relied on daily papers for their news. However, nowadays many people get their news online. It is believed by some people that conventional newspapers will continue to be the major source of news no matter how many people are accessing the Internet. to search for information. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this belief.

There are several compelling reasons why online news has seen an enormous increase in popularity. First, since in this digital age, the Internet can provide people with up-to-the-minute news as it happens, it is a more convenient and faster way to read news. For example, there are is a large number of online websites like CNN which offer readers access to the latest news 24 hours a day everyday. Second, by possessing a smarphone or a laptop, they can instantly go online and read the news of their choices from all over the world. It means that they donot have to go out to buy newspapers, which helps save their time for more important tasks. [ 3]

By contrast, newspapers' the obvious drawbacks of newspapers are making them a less common news source. The major reason for this is their monetary and environmental costs. Since there is a variety of freely available news on the Internet, newspapers [ 4] newspaper publishers are now facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Consequently, even some famous publishers papers such as The Guardian or The New York Times have to resort to providing news online news alongside with the conventional ones print editions to make a profit. Another reason for this downward trend is related to the environment. al issues. There is a body of increasing public concern about deforestation caused by the paper industry. opinion who rejects buying newspapers because their production relates to deforestation. As a result, many people see online news as a greener alternative. newspapers are intensively losing their popularity.

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[ 1]: Write a sentence at the start of the introduction to present the topic to the reader.

[ 2]: Write one or two sentences to provide some background.

[ 3]: That is just details about the same point. Instead, you can talk about another point – for example, online news can be easily updated and changed, unlike printed newspapers.

[ 4]: Note how we make the plural of a compound noun.

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Newspapers have been around with us for over a century. Until recently, many people relied on daily papers for their news; however, nowadays they turn to get their news online. It is believed by some people that conventional newspapers will continue to be the major source of news no matter how many people are accessing the Internet. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this belief.

There are several compelling reasons why online news has seen an enormous increase in popularity. First, since in this digital age, the Internet can provide people with up-to-the-minute news as it happens, it is a more convenient and faster way to read news. For example, there are a large number of online websites like CNN which offer readers access to the latest news 24 hours a day everyday. Second, because online news is virtual, it can be easily updated or changed. This means that if there is anything new about a story, readers do not have to wait for the next issue to learn about it.

By contrast, the obvious drawbacks of newspapers are their monetary and environmental costs. Since there is a variety of freely available news on the Internet, newspaper publishers are now facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Consequently, even some famous papers such as The Guardian or The New York Times have to resort to providing news online along with the conventional print editions to make a profit. Another reason for this downward trend is related to the environment. There is increasing public concern about deforestation caused by the paper industry. As a result, many people see online news as a greener alternative.

In conclusion, due to the convenience of online news, I think that newspapers are set to become less favourable.

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This is my fixed essay. Thank you so much for having corrected it. At first, I thought that no one would help me correct this essay cuz because it was too bad to read. I really struggle to be good at writing. T.T

Newspapers have been around with us for over a century. Until recently, many people relied on daily papers for their news. However, nowadays they turn to get their news online. It is believed by some people that conventional newspapers will continue to be the major source of news no matter how many people are accessing the Internet. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this belief.

There are several compelling reasons why online news has seen an enormous increase in popularity. First, since in this digital age, the Internet can provide people with up-to-the-minute news as it happens, it is a more convenient and faster way to read news. For example, there are a large number of online websites like CNN which offer readers access to the latest news 24 hours a day everyday. Second, because online news is virtual, it can be easily updated or changed. This means that if there is anything new about a story, readers do not have to wait for the next issue to learn about it.

By contrast, the obvious drawbacks of newspapers are their monetary and environmental costs. Since there is a variety of freely available news on the Internet, newspaper publishers are now facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Consequently, even some famous papers such as The Guardian or The New York Times have to resort to providing news online along with the conventional print editions to make a profit. Another reason for this downward trend is related to the environment. There is increasing public concern about deforestation caused by the paper industry. As a result, many people see online news as a greener alternative.

In conclusion, due to the dynamic nature, convenience and lower monetary and environmental costs of online news, I think [ 1] believe that newspapers will continue to decline in popularity. [ 2] are set to become less favourable.

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[ 1]: “believe” is slightly stronger than “think”.

[ 2]: “set to” means it hasn’t started yet.