topic: art is considerd an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. do you think it is important for children to be taught art? do you think children should be encouraged to focus on arts rather than other subject.
it is believed that art plays a vital role in every country as it also conveys cultural values. although there are sensible reasons to say that children should be taught art, they also need to have a balance of all subjects for holistic development.
Granted, art courses should be offered widely to teach students. This is based on the assumption that art allows youth to practice a wide range of skills that are useful not only for life, but also for learning. For example, grasping pencil, crayons, chalk and paintbrushes enables children develop their fine motor muscle. This development will help children with writing and other tasks that requires controlled movement. In addition, Art gives students a creative outlet that can help relieve stress and work through things happening in their lives. Such free expression is beneficial for overall health and well-being.
There should be the equilibrium between children learning art and other subjects. This is because studying other subjects can improve students' general knowledge about, say, chemistry, physics, mathematics which are in accordance with the development of scientific and engineering competence. Therefore, the corallary of concentrating on art in lieu of others would be the loss of critical thinking and problem solving which in turn may pose a risk for students' future as this can suspend opportunites in their later life.
In conclusion, art is necessary for students since it is useful to children's learning and well-being. However, the idea that students focusing on art at the expense of core subject should be discouraged.
Topic: Art is considerd an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on arts rather than other subjects?
One of the most important rules of English writing is that each sentence begins with a capital letter.
it is believed that art plays a vital role in every country as it also conveys cultural values. although there are sensible reasons to say that children should be taught art, they also need to have a balance of all subjects for holistic development.
If you make the most basic mistake in the first letter of your essay, the examiner will not be happy and you will lose a lot of points. Every sentence begins with a capital letter.
This is a two-question essay. You need to answer both briefly in the first paragraph.
Notice the word "you" in the prompt. "You" refers to the person writing the essay.
So answer the two questions, for example, like this:
1. I think it is necessary for art to be included in all grades of school, from first through high school.
2. However, it should not be the focus of the curriculum, but in addition to the core subjects of maths, science and reading and writing.
Granted, art courses should be offered widely to teach students. This is based on the assumption that art allows youth to practice a wide range of skills that are useful not only for life, but also for learning. For example, grasping pencil, (wrong form) crayons, chalk and paintbrushes enables children develop their fine motor muscle. (wrong form) This development will help children with writing and other tasks that requires controlled movement. In addition, Art gives students a creative outlet that can help relieve stress and work through things happening in their lives. Such free expression is beneficial for overall health and well-being.
There should be the an equilibrium between children learning art and other subjects. This is because studying other subjects can improve students' general knowledge about, say, chemistry, physics, mathematics (ungrammatical, missing conjunction) which are in accordance with the development of scientific and engineering competence. Therefore, the corallary (wrong word, wrong spelling) of concentrating on art in lieu of others would be the loss of critical thinking and problem solving which in turn may pose a risk for students' future as this can suspend (wrong word) opportunites in their later life.
In conclusion, art is necessary for students since it is useful to children's learning and well-being. However, the idea that (wrong word) of students focusing on art at the expense of core subject (wrong form) should be discouraged. (Discourage an idea is not a good collocation.)
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Can i use "deprive of" instead of "suspend" and "dispel" instead of "discourage". Thank you