Topic: The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses.
Do you agree or disagree?



Some people believe that all mothers and fathers should take part in parenting courses to be well prepared for the development of their children. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view.


There are several reasons why I believe parents should enroll in parenting classes, one of which is to be equipped with basic medical training. To be more specific, first aid training teaches parents how to deal with emergency situations such as a high fever or a breathing issue, so that they can deal with these problems more effectively and ensure the well-being of their children. Secondly, parents will have a better understanding of their children's needs, which means that they can take the best care of them. A baby, for example, If she cries when she wakes up in the morning, her parent will understand that she is hungry; Therefore, they can give her what she needs, her breakfast.


Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that parenting courses will provide parents with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages, from the time their children born to when they become an adult. Especially in the troublesome teenager stage, they may be misbehaving while going through adolescence. If parents do not gain enough knowledge to build a good strategy to lead their children in the right way at this stage, they may eventually become bad people in society.


In conclusion, it seems to me that parenting courses could offer beneficial outcomes for both parents and children, and all the mothers and fathers should participate to guarantee their children's growth.

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Some people believe that all mothers and fathers should take part in parenting courses to be well prepared for raising the development of their children. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view.


There are several reasons why I believe parents should enroll in parenting classes, one of which is to be equipped with basic medical training. To be more specific, first aid training teaches parents how to deal with emergency situations such as a high fever or a breathing issue, (Copied text. ) so that they can deal with these problems more effectively and ensure the well-being of their children. Secondly, (incorrect transition - there should be a "first" to follow with "second") parents will have a better understanding of their children's needs, which means that they can take the best care of them. A baby, for example, If (ungrammatical) she cries when she wakes up in the morning, her parent will understand that she is hungry; Therefore, they (wrong pronoun) can give her what she needs, her bottle. breakfast.


Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, (inappropriate transition) I also believe that parenting courses will provide parents with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages, from the time their children born (ungrammatical) to when they become an adult. Especially in the troublesome teenager stage, they may be misbehaving while going through adolescence. (Copied text) If parents do not gain enough knowledge to build a good strategy to lead their children in the right way at this stage, they may eventually become bad people in society.


In conclusion, it seems to me that parenting courses could offer beneficial outcomes for both parents and children, (Copied text) and all the mothers and fathers should participate to guarantee their children's growth.

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