More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?


In today's world, many people hold the belief that cities are suitable environments for them to have a high quality of life; therefore, migration to urban areas is becoming a trend currently. Despite having a myriad of benefits, city life also has some difficulties and I believe that the governments should issue solutions as soon as possible to tackle these problems.


There are several obstacles when people choose to live in metropolises. First and foremost, more and more people migrating to urban areas can lead to environmental problems. Nowadays, people tend to use private transports such as cars and motorbikes realizing many exhaust fumes in the environment; therefore, dwellers living in cities can easily suffer from some respiratory illnesses including asthma and bronchitis. Furthermore, residing in cities is exorbitant compared to remote areas. In fact, people need to pay their money into various things ranging from utility bills and healthcare to rents. Hence, urban lives might become a financial burden for the poor as well as someone wanting to achieve high living standards.


However, governments can apply some particular methods to address these difficulties. Firstly, they should propagandize and educate people on the importance of environmental protection by reducing the use of private transports and enhancing people’s utilization of green energy. If each individual is more conscious of conserving the environment, we can make a huge difference in our lives in urban areas. Moreover, the government should reduce the prices of some essential products such as food and clothes to meet the needs of residents as well as the needy who reside in the cities so all people can have a better quality of life.


In conclusion, although there are various challenges when people live in the cities, the governments can issue some immediate solutions to deal with these existing difficulties.

In today's world, (You do not need phrases like this when the sentence has a present tense verb.) Many people hold the belief that cities are conducive suitable environments for them to have a high quality of life; therefore, migration to urban areas from the countryside is increasing. becoming a trend currently. Despite having many a myriad (not a natural word choice. It is too overblown.) of benefits, city life also has some difficulties such as pollution, traffic and high costs for housing. However, these problems can be fixed by legislation. and I believe that the governments should issue solutions as soon as possible to tackle these problems. (This is off-topic. Read the prompts carefully. Focus on answering these questions, and not other questions. The essay prompt did not ask for a recommendation. It only asked you to present some difficulties and options for solutions. )

There are several obstacles people encounter when they come people choose to live in metropolises. First and foremost, more and more people migrating to urban areas can lead to environmental problems. Nowadays, People tend to use private transports such as cars and motorbikes which emit noxious realizing many exhaust fumes in the environment; therefore, dwellers (wrong word) living in cities they can easily suffer from some respiratory illnesses including asthma and bronchitis. Furthermore, renting a flat residing in cities is exorbitant compared to small towns. remote areas. In fact, people need to pay more for most their money into various things ranging from utility bills and healthcare to groceries. rents. Hence, it urban lives might become a financial burden for the poor as well as someone wanting to achieve high living standards.

However, governments can apply some particular methods to address these difficulties. Firstly, First, they should propagandize and (Propaganda is a very negative word. It means repeated exaggeration and lies to convince people of something that is actually false or bad for them, but good for the political leaders.) educate people on the importance of environmental protection by reducing the use of private transportation transports and promoting the use enhancing (This word is misused a lot.) people’s utilization of green energy. If each individual is more conscious of conserving the environment, by recycling glass, metals and plastic, and not wasting water we can make a huge difference in our lives in urban areas. Moreover, the government should take steps to reduce the prices of some essential products such as food, water, electricity and clothes to meet the needs of residents as well as the needy who reside in the cities. That way, all people can have a better quality of life.


In conclusion, although there are various challenges when people live in the cities, there are some solutions that governments can adopt to make life better for everyone. issue some immediate solutions to deal with these existing difficulties.

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