In the modern era, the rapid development of technologies brings many essential benefits for generations, such as e-learning, meeting online, online courses, transportation, etc. Therefore, adults and children can work and learn from home without the limitations of information barriers, and it becomes convenient and suitable for many situations in real life.
From my point of view, this is a positive development which gives people chances to achieve many new things to apply to their real work. For example, people used to write letters and needed the post office to send them to someone which could waste many days or weeks to finish the journey of transferring information, otherwise, people nowadays only use several applications on their mobile phone to send information and receive replied messages immediately through many types of applications, it costs low and saves time a lot. Moreover, the development of technologies can help people transport easily by many vehicles, and it is fast and more comfortable. Due to aeroplanes and boats, tonnes of goods and materials for various other industries can be carried out between other countries quickly, bringing the higher income for many companies.
Apart from the many benefits of modern technologies, this development leads to some disadvantages of behaviour and attitude of people. Typically, the youth generation is addicted to smartphones and computers. For instance, they become lazy in activities and spend many hours using their phones, making many kids be obese soon and getting trouble communicating with society. Finally, development is essential, but people must keep it on the right path and prevent any problems in advance.

Topic:

Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Thanh Tân Lê Topic:
Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because computer technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


In the modern era, The rapid development of information and communication technologies (There are many types of technologies. Be specific.) brings many essential benefits for generations, such as e-learning, meeting online, online courses, transportation, (Do you mean cars and busses?) etc. (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or phrases like "and so on" in formal writing.) Therefore, adults and children can work and learn from home without the limitations of information barriers, (That makes no sense.) and it becomes convenient and suitable for many situations in real life. (You need to answer the essay prompt in the opening paragraph. Do not put your opinion in a body paragraph.)
From my point of view, this is a positive development which gives people chances to achieve many new things to apply to their real work.


For example, people used to write letters and needed the post office to send them to someone which could waste many days or weeks to finish the journey of transferring information, (comma splice error - ungrammatical sentence) otherwise, people nowadays only use several applications on their mobile phone to send information and receive replied messages immediately through many types of applications, (repetitive. - you already wrote "applications in the same sentence.) it costs low (wrong word) and saves a lot of time a lot. Moreover, the development of technologies (What kind or technology?) can help people transport (wrong word) easily by many vehicles, and it is fast and more comfortable. Due to aeroplanes and boats, tonnes of goods and materials for various other industries can be carried out between other countries quickly, bringing a the higher income for many companies. (That has nothing to do with the topic which is working from home or studying from home.)


All the rest is off topic. This is not an advantages/ disadvantages essay. You must answer the prompt: Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Then in the two body paragraphs, give two reasons for your opinion. You should develop each reason with examples and your personal experience.

Finally, in the conclusion restate your answer, and summarize your arguments.

You did not write a conclusion. You did not write the correct essay type. There are 5 different types, and you have to learn how to write each type.


Apart from the many benefits of modern technologies, this development leads to some disadvantages of behaviour and attitude of people. Typically, the youth generation is addicted to smartphones and computers. For instance, they become lazy in activities and spend many hours using their phones, making many kids be obese soon and getting trouble communicating with society. Finally, development is essential, but people must keep it on the right path and prevent any problems in advance.


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The rapid development of information transferring and storing technologies brings various essential benefits for generations who are both adults and children, such as attending online meetings and courses or working from home. Therefore, this positive development provides many convenient and cheaper methods to do many realistic things from home.

First, in the mid-term of the Covid-19 pandemic, many students must stay at home, especially quarantined in isolation areas; several applications on smart devices help learners take part in online courses to overtake their curriculum schedule. For example, MS Teams and Zoom, two platforms of lots of applications, supply virtual classrooms for students and virtual meetings for employees and employers affected by Covid-19. Moreover, people can gossip, chat, and have job discussions with each other by Facebook or Viber instead of contact in person, which leads to saving time and being comfortable. In addition, dozens of hard materials for both work and study, such as books and documents, are replaced by soft files on cloud platforms, named Onedrive or Google drive. Staff can work at home easily, and students can research learning materials freely.

Furthermore, working from home is a chance for adults to do multiple jobs to earn more money, and students can attend many useful courses to promote their own development. In conclusion, the advancement of information and communication technologies is important for society in general and individuals in particular, what is a convenient and accessible way to achieve many essential goals, and promotes the productivity of students and workers.

The rapid development of information transferring and storing communications technologies brings various essential benefits for generations who are both adults and children, such as attending online meetings and courses or working from home. Therefore, this positive development provides many convenient and cheaper methods to do many realistic things from home instead of commuting to work or school..

First, in the mid-term middle of the Covid-19 pandemic, many students must stay at home, especially quarantined in isolation areas but several applications on smart devices help learners take part in online courses to overtake their curriculum schedule. (That is not good English.) For example, MS Teams and Zoom, two of the most popular platforms of lots of applications, supply virtual classrooms for students and virtual meetings for employees and employers. affected by Covid-19. Moreover, people can gossip, chat, and have job discussions with each other by Facebook or Viber instead of contact getting together in person, which leads to saving time and being comfortable. In addition, dozens of hard hard copy materials for both work and study, such as books and documents, are replaced by soft files on cloud platforms such as named Onedrive or Google drive and they can be shared by a collaborative team working on a project. Staff can work at home easily, and students can research learning materials freely.

Furthermore, working from home is a chance for allows adults to do multiple jobs to earn more money, and students can attend many useful courses given by the top universities to promote their own development. (You need a separate paragraph here, because you are writing the conclusion. However, this paragraph is much shorter than the previous body paragraph. That is not good. Your paragraphs should be balanced, and the argument points equally well developed.)


In conclusion, the advancement of information and communication technologies is important for society in general and individuals in particular. It offers what is a convenient and accessible way to achieve many essential goals, and promotes the productivity of students and workers.