Task 2:

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a postitive or negative development?


My essay:

It is common these days, there are many advertisements that people can see on communication devices and businesses usually try to show that their products are special. This essay strongly believes that companies have reasons for their advertising and it is a positive effect develop for the market.

To begin with, businesses that show something news about their products could create attention to customers and make their products so different with others. In addition, if firms advertise about the unique of their products or services, customers could choose them immediately for their desires. For example, customers who want to buy a smart television that can connect to wifi are have a attention to advertised ones and ignore traditional ones. Thus, this practice could increase the competition between companies that are the same products. Besides that, advertising about news function of products may bring benefits for firms such as they could sell the products easier and decrease the inventory.

On the other hand, although the positive aspects that advertising create for firms. However, if the advertisements are not the same with real products, it may encourage clients do not satisfy and give some policy problems for companies. For instance, customers who believe that the smartphone their buy has a high performance camera following the advertisement, but they realize that the camera is just a normal when they use it. Therefore, customers have to give it back to producers or complain about it on the social networks while companies do not want to cope with this issue.

All in all, the advertisements about news function of products are positive for the market. Customers could have benefits and companies have profit from these activities. However, companies should care about true information in their advertising.

It is common these days , there are many advertisements that people can see on communication devices and businesses usually for businesses to try to show that their products are special, and in particular, new. This essay strongly believes I believe that companies have reasons for their such advertising strategy, and it is a positive effect development. for the market.

To begin with, businesses that show something new or unique [ 1] news about their products could create can attract the attention to of customers and make their products so different [ 2] with from others. In addition, if firms advertise about the unique of their products or services, customers could choose them immediately for their desires.

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[ 1]: “new” is not the same as “news”.

[ 2]: Use “different from”.

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