Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people hold the belief that teaching children how to be good parts of the community should be done by parents, while others think that school is more professional in this. In my opinion, although both the parents and the school can educate the minors, I strongly agree with the former view.
School is believed to be the best place to teach students about all subjects, such as maths, physics, etc. However, it is extremely difficult to make them learn from lessons they got taught in class. For instance, when a teacher provides her students with information about good and bad behaviors, they may listen to it but easily forget after going home. Thus, the children will keep behaving badly towards everyone. This is because they only have few hours at school, and their teacher does not have much time to have an effect on them more than their parents. That is why school is not potential for educating kids to be good citizens.
On the other hand, mothers and fathers are the ones whom children spend most time with. As a result, if the parents act in a good manner, their kids might imitate them and become better people. For example, when a mother gives her seat to an old man on the bus, her daughter will observe the mother’s behavior to do it again with some other old men. Gradually, that girl may learn how to behave well towards everyone by seeing her mother be kind to people. This is how parents have a great impact on their children and teach them about good lifestyles.
In conclusion, the fathers and the mothers should be the ones who educate their kids on how to be good parts of the community instead of the school.
Some people hold the belief that teaching children how to be good parts of the community ("Part" is the wrong word here.) upstanding citizens should be done by parents, while others think that schools should have this responsibility. is more professional (wrong word.) in this. In my opinion, although both the parents and the school play a part, can educate the minors, (wrong word.) I strongly believe that the parents have to be primary role models of a good citizen. agree with the former (Do not use "former" and "latter". It is very disruptive to the flow of reading. The reader has to stop, scan backwards, and figure out what you mean. These are not good words if you want cohesion and coherence. .) view.
School is believed to be the best place to teach students about all subjects, such as maths, physics, etc. (Do not use "etc." or "..." or "and so on" in formal writing.) However, it is extremely difficult to make them learn from lessons they got taught in class. (I do not understand. Is it extremely difficult for students to learn maths, for example, how to add and subtract numbers? Do they quickly forget that 1+1 = 2? ) For instance, when a teacher provides her students with information about good and bad behaviors, they may listen to it but easily forget after going home. Thus, the children will keep behaving badly towards everyone. (I don't understand. Teachers can discipline students, if they behave badly. For example, if a boy yells and screams during class, or pulls a girl's hair, or bullies another boy, they can be put in a small dark room by themselves, or be sent to the principal's office. The officials will call or email a negative report to the child's parents. Don't schools have rules of discipline and codes for behaviors in your country? Are unruly children punished, or can they do anything they want?) This is because they only have few hours at school, and their teacher does not have much time to have an effect on them more than their parents. That is why school is not potential (wrong word.) the best environment for educating kids (wrong word. too informal) children to be good citizens.
On the other hand, mothers and fathers are the ones whom children spend most time with. As a result, if the parents act in a good manner, their sons and daughters kids might imitate them and become better people. For example, when a mother gives her seat to an old man on the bus, her daughter will observe the mother’s behavior to do it again with some other old men. Gradually, that girl may learn how to behave well towards everyone by seeing her mother be kind to people. This is how parents have a great impact on their children and teach them about being polite and respectful. good lifestyles.
In conclusion, the fathers and the mothers should be the ones who guide their children to be fair and honest contributors to society educate their kids on how to be good parts of the community instead of the school.
