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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, growing traffic and pollution are some of the most serious issues all over the world. Therefore, the majority of people suggest the ultimate solution of increasing the expense of petrol. It is undeniable that boosting petrol price is an effective way to solve traffic and pollution, but there are other approaches to tackle these problems.

Petrol is the source of fuel for a lot of vehicles such as cars, bikes, trucks,…, which makes it a root reason for growing traffic as well as pollution problems. As the result, the government passes laws to raise the price of petrol with a view to reducing petrol use. This could improve the environment, diminish traffic jams and air pollution to an extent; however, could not solve the problems completely.

What this argument fails to take into consideration is that not only petrol but other factors in traffic contribute to congestion. First of all, it is overpopulation that creates a great deal of commuters. Therefore, appropriate population policies should be propagandized by the government in order to hinder overpopulation. For example, every family should be supported to have only from one to two children. In addition, the growth of factories and manufacturers should be controlled because those places emit a huge amount of pollutants into the air everyday. Moreover, authorities should have some environment-friendly campaigns in order to encourage people to save the environment and improve the standard of living

In a nutshell, enhancing the petrol price is quite effective but other solutions should be considered as to tackle pollution and traffic problems absolutely.

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Nowadays, growing traffic and pollution are some of the most serious issues all over the world. Therefore, a the majority of the people suggest the ultimate solution of increasing the expense (wrong word. - price) of petrol. It is undeniable that raising the boosting petrol price of petrol is an effective way to solve traffic and pollution, but there are other approaches to tackle these problems.

Petrol is the source of fuel for a lot of vehicles such as cars, bikes, trucks,…, (Never use ellipses, "etc" and phrases such as "and so on" in a formal essay. It is very bad style. ) which makes it a root reason (wrong word - cause) for growing traffic as well as pollution problems. As the result, the government passes laws to raise the price of petrol with a view to reducing petrol use. This could improve the environment, diminish traffic jams and air pollution to an extent; (ungrammatical series) however, it can could not solve the problems completely.

What this argument fails to take into consideration is that not only petrol but other factors in traffic contribute to congestion. First of all, it is overpopulation that creates a large number great deal (wrong phrase "great deal of + non-count noun" e.g. a great deal of money. ) of commuters. Therefore, appropriate population policies should be propagandized (propaganda has a very negative connotation. ) by the government in order to hinder (wrong word) overpopulation. For example, every family should be supported to have only from one to two children. In addition, the growth of factories and manufacturers should be controlled because those places emit a huge large amount of pollutants into the air everyday. (wrong form. ) Moreover, authorities should have some environment-friendly campaigns in order to encourage people to save the environment and improve the standard of living (missing punctuation)

In a nutshell, (Avoid such informalities in formal essays.) In conclusion, enhancing (wrong word) the petrol price is quite effective but other solutions should be considered as to tackle pollution and traffic problems absolutely.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, growing traffic and pollution are some of the most serious issues all over the world. Therefore, the majority of people suggest the ultimate solution of increasing the expense of petrol. It is undeniable that boosting petrol price is an effective way to solve traffic and pollution, but there are other approaches to tackle these problems.

Petrol is the source of fuel for a lot of vehicles such as cars, bikes, trucks,…, which makes it a root reason for growing traffic as well as pollution problems. As the result, the government passes laws to raise the price of petrol with a view to reducing petrol use. This could improve the environment, diminish traffic jams and air pollution to an extent; however, could not solve the problems completely.

What this argument fails to take into consideration is that not only petrol but other factors in traffic contribute to congestion. First of all, it is overpopulation that creates a great deal of commuters. Therefore, appropriate population policies should be propagandized by the government in order to hinder overpopulation. For example, every family should be supported to have only from one to two children. In addition, the growth of factories and manufacturers should be controlled because those places emit a huge amount of pollutants into the air everyday. Moreover, authorities should have some environment-friendly campaigns in order to encourage people to save the environment and improve the standard of living

In a nutshell, enhancing the petrol price is quite effective but other solutions should be considered as to tackle pollution and traffic problems absolutely.

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