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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree.

Concerning the issues of having a diet without meat or fish, it is believed that vegetarian diet is better for the human body. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.

First of all, it can be said with certainty that vegetarian is more healthier. The key explanation is possibly because they eat only plant foods or dried fruits are high in fiber. Besides, they do not eat meat so it has lower risks of developing several chronic illness as hear disease, diabetes, some forms of cancer and obesity.

Second of all, a special consideration in this case is that good health. The main basis is probably because vegetarians eat a lot of vegetables. That properly give their adequate nutrition to support body. Vegetables and fruits like spinach, berries, … or nuts are a great source of vitamin A, E, K, … prevent their from aging, strengthen the brain. Instead of eating many kind of food to get these vitamins, they only need a bowl of spinach or cereal with Greek yogurt, it is not only provide vitamins but also helps their weight loss.

In contrast, it must be admitted that there are some advantages to becoming a vegetarian. Some of healthy food is quite expensive, it costs so much money. Moreover, if they do not know how to balanced meal, they might suffer from a lack of calories to provide energy needs. Consequently, they will feel unable to do anything else.

Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thought to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that a vegetarian diet is not for everyone and people have to know the way to choose foods and preparation of meals.

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Anh ThyFirst of all, it can be said with certainty that vegetarian is more healthier.

You have missed out words. It would be better to write that a vegetarian diet is.


You also need to delete the red part.

Anh ThyThe key explanation is possibly because they eat only plant foods

No. Vegetarians avoid eating animals but, they have eggs, honey and milk, as well as food from plants and fungi. See the introduction of the article here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vegetarianism

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Concerning the issues of having a diet without meat or fish, it is believed that a vegetarian diet is better for the human body. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.

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First of all, it can be said with certainty that a vegetarian is more healthier. (incorrect comparative) than a person who primarily eats meat. The key explanation is possibly because they eat only plant foods or dried fruits are high in fiber. (Ungrammatical sentence structure. ... they eat only plant-based foods or dried fruit. ) Besides, they do not eat meat so it (The meat? Meat does not get sick.) has lower risks of developing several chronic illness as hear (wrong word - hear is a verb. ) disease, diabetes, some forms of cancer and obesity.

Second of all, a special consideration in this case is that good health. (Ungrammatical sentence structure. ) The main reason basis is probably because vegetarians eat a lot of vegetables. That properly give (subject / verb mismatch) their (wrong pronoun) adequate nutrition to support body. (Incorrect) Vegetables and fruits like spinach, berries, (Incorrect usage. Do not use ellipses in an academic essay.) or nuts are a great source of vitamin A, E, K, … prevent their (wrong pronoun) from aging, strengthen the brain. (ungrammatical) Instead of eating many kind (wrong form) of food to get these vitamins, they only need a bowl of spinach or cereal with Greek yogurt, it is not only provide (Incorrect verb form - "is provide" is not valid) ) vitamins but also helps their weight loss.

In contrast, it must be admitted that there are some advantages to becoming a vegetarian. Some of healthy food is quite expensive, (comma error. Wrong punctuation. This is a comma splice error. The sentence is ungrammatical.) it costs so much money. Moreover, if they do not know how to balanced meal, (wrong usage) they might suffer from a lack of calories to provide for their energy needs. Consequently, they will feel unable to do anything else.

Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thought to what extent this issue should be supported. (Off-topic. the essay topic asked your opinion, not what other people should think.) However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that a vegetarian diet is not for everyone and people have to know the way to choose foods and prepare meals. preparation (wrong form) of meals.