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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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Computers abound these days, and many children and adults spend as many hours as they can playing video games. Without a doubt this matter influenced their life badly. What these negative effects are and how they can be reduced, are questions which will be discussed in the rest of this essay.
In the mind of children who playing video games rather than doing their homework or spending time with their friends and adults who sponge off their parents and prefer to be a ship captain in a game instead of having a job, nothing is more appealing than playing video games. Consequences of this manner are lack of exercise and lack of social skills for both groups, losing crucial time which must be utilize for receiving education for the former group and wasting the life for the latter group.
What can be done to minimize those negative impacts? Adults know the consequence of their behavior and they continue that because all things they want is provided by their parents. Hence, it is not possible to persuade them only with talking and serious action should be done. For example, their access to computers must be restricted and providing their needs must be stopped. Therefore, they would be made to find a job and to be independent. The situation is different for kids, if they experience the pleasure of playing real games with other kids, playing video games will pale into insignificance in their eyes. It should be noted that children learn social skills through playing with others and doing real game helps them to be more active.
In conclusion, playing video games has negative effects on player which are different for adults and children. In order to reduce those impacts specific treatment such as placing restriction on having access to computers and using superseded pastime must be used respectively.

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Computers abound these days, and many children and adults (Off-topic. The topic describes children, not adults) spend as many hours as they can playing video games. Without a doubt this habit matter has affected influenced their lives badly, ruining their health and social skills. It is up to their parents to take action to change them. What these negative effects are and how they can be reduced, are questions which will be discussed in the rest of this essay.

Never mention your essay. Do not just write the instructions - the examiner knows what you are going to write about. Instead, write a thesis statement - the main point of your essay, to get the reader interested in what you will tell them. See my changes that comprise a thesis statement


In the mind of children who playing video games rather than doing their homework or spending time with their friends and adults who sponge off their parents (Off-topic. The topic describes children, not adults.) and prefer to be a ship captain in a game instead of having a job, nothing is more appealing than playing video games. Consequences of this manner are lack of exercise and lack of social skills for both groups, losing crucial time which must be utilize (wrong form) for receiving getting a good education for the former group and wasting the life for the latter group.


What can be done to minimize those negative impacts? Adults (Off-topic. The topic describes children, not adults) know the consequence of their behavior but and they continue wasting their time that because all things they want is (wrong form) provided by their parents. Hence, it is not possible to persuade them only with talking and serious action should be done. For example, their access to computers must be restricted and providing their needs must be stopped. Therefore, they would be made forced to find a job and to be independent. The situation is different for kids, if they experience the pleasure of playing real games with other kids, playing video games will pale into insignificance in their eyes. It should be noted that children learn social skills through playing with others and doing real game (unnatural) helps them to be more active.


In conclusion, playing video games has negative effects on player (wrong form) which are different for adults and children. In order to reduce those impacts specific treatment such as placing restriction on having access to computers and using superseded pastime (wrong collocation) must be used respectively.


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