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Topic:

Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

My essay:

Every year, we all hear about erosion, flooding and other terrible natural disasters which directly affect human beings. So what are the reasons? In many studies, they show that deforestation is one of the biggest causes of weather’s changes and serious environmental consequences. It’s the time people took action to prevent this problem and make the earth green again.

Logging companies often cut down trees for manufacturing and business. If they are caught doing it illegally, they just have to pay a quite low fine. So I think the punishment must be more strict. Besides, the guard or defender needs to patrol the forest regularly.

Government and community need to raise the awareness among people about the importance of forests to life and the environment. We should reuse, reduce and recycle the wooden products daily, especially paper.

When the forests become worse because of deforestation, we need to make them return to their integrity again. We should plant more trees in the place where most plants are being cut down.

Therefore, controlling deforestation needs the contribution of every individual. If everyone gives a hand on it, we can make a difference to our global environment.


Every year, we all hear about erosion, flooding and other terrible natural disasters which directly affect us. human beings. So what are the reasons? In many studies, they show that deforestation is one of the biggest causes of weather’s changes (unnatural) changes in weather patterns and serious environmental consequences. It’s (Do not use contractions n formal writing.) the It is time people took action to prevent this problem and make the earth green again.

Logging companies often cut down trees for building materials. manufacturing and business. If they are caught doing it illegally, they just have to pay a quite low fine. So I think the punishment must be more strict. Besides, the guard or defender needs the government needs to have guards to patrol the forest regularly.

The government and community need to raise the awareness among people about the importance of forests to life and the environment. We should reuse, reduce and recycle the wooden products made from wood daily, especially paper.

When the forests disappear become worse because of deforestation, we need to restore make them by replanting the native species in previously forested areas. return to their integrity again. (unnatural) We should plant more trees in the place where most plants are being cut down.

Therefore, controlling deforestation needs the contribution of every individual. If everyone gives a hand on it, we can make a difference to our global environment.

thank you so much