Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether going to college or getting a job straight after leaving high school is more beneficial for students. From my point of view, going to college will be the best choice for them.
On the other hand, it is understandable that many teenagers often choose to get a job after graduating from high school. First, young people can become more independent, especially financially independent. They are able to earn money on their own and do not need to depend on their families. Then, they can afford their own cars or houses and maybe start their own family. Moreover, getting a job allows the young to progress more quickly. They will have a chance to gain real experiences and learn practical skills in their chosen job. This leads to their promotion and successful career.
However, I would argue that pursuing higher education at college after leaving high school will be the best choice for the young. First, they will obtain a big amount of knowledge in their major, and develop useful skills for their future careers such as communication skills, analytical skills, and critical thinking. Furthermore, many positions require qualifications at college. It is impossible to become doctors, teachers, and lawyers without relevant degrees. As a result, getting qualifications allows the young to have more job opportunities with higher salaries.
To sum up, it seems to me that students will benefit more from going to university than getting a job straight after they leave high school.
PhamHuongOn the other hand,
You make the exact same mistake again!
It is OK to make mistakes. Everyone makes mistakes.
But people use mistakes to learn from. Then they don't make the same mistake again and again.
People have different views about whether going to college or getting a job straight after leaving high school is more beneficial. for students. (A student is someone enrolled in a school. After leaving high school, the person is not a student. They might become a student again if they are accepted in university. ) From my point of view, going to college will be the best choice for them.
On the other hand, it is understandable that many teenagers often choose to get a job after graduating from high school. First, young people can become more independent, especially financially independent. They are able to earn money on their own and do not need to depend on their families. Then, They can afford their own cars or houses and maybe start their own family. Moreover, getting a job allows the young to progress more quickly. They will have a chance to gain real experiences and learn practical skills in their chosen job. This leads to their promotion and successful career.
However, I would argue that (Do not write your thesis in the body paragraphs. Your thesis is in the introduction.) pursuing higher education at college after leaving high school will be the best choice for most people. the young. First, they will obtain a big amount of (very awkward. Poor English) a solid theoretical foundation knowledge in their major, and develop useful skills for their future careers such as communication skills, analytical skills, and critical thinking. Furthermore, many positions require qualifications at college. It is impossible to become doctors, teachers, and lawyers without relevant degrees. As a result, getting qualifications allows the young them to have more job opportunities with higher salaries.
To sum up, it seems to me that students those leaving high school will benefit more from going to university than getting a job straight after they graduate. leave high school.
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Thank you for your support. It was careless of me to make this mistake again.
Some IELTS books i read, examiners accept the phrases: 'it is understandable' and 'i would argue, I believe' in a paragraph like this: However, I would argue that
PhamHuongSome IELTS books i read, examiners accept the phrases: 'it is understandable' and 'i would argue, I believe' in a paragraph like this: However,
I would argue that
They are grammatical English. However, they add no useful content to the essay. Good writers avoid wordiness, redundancy and useless clauses.
Paragraph 1: Describe the topic. Include a thesis statement, that is, your opinion or main points that you will present.
Paragraph 2: Topic sentence: Your first argument. Develop your point with examples.
Paragraph 3: Topic sentence: Your second argument. Develop your point with examples.
Paragraph 4: Summarize points #1 and #2. Rephrase your thesis.
See 10:53 Avoid "it is..."
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