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Topic: In many countries, schools have serious problems with student's behaviour. What are the causes and what solutions can you suggest.


In many countries, some student's behaviours may become serious problem in school. There could be several reason for this, and i suppose parents play an important role in solving this issue.

Many children are more vulnerable to social evils. The more modern the life is, the more parents go out for work, so they grually neglect their children. The students usually stay at home alone without participating in outdoor activities. Besides, they can be spoilt by mass media. Another reason is their parents' indulgence, some parents do not teach them typical standards of society which can make them self-centered, egocentric and lack proper respect for other people. Competitiveness in schools also influence the behaviours of students. Students sometime feel jealous of others' achievements so that they do something negative to their friends.

It is true that, parents' training is the best solution to this problem. They should spend more time with their children, educate them about the importance of appropriate manners. In addition, parents should also explain the bad effects the children can cause. Students are the people who have many difficulties at schools, so parents ought to lend a sympathetic ear to the children and give them favorable advice. It not only create a good relationship among the family but also makes students respect the parents.

Last but not least, government should support parents in educating the children. Moreover, parents and governments must be the pioneers in performing what they train thể children.

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In many countries, some student's behaviours may become serious problem in school. There could be several reason for this, and i (This is a very serious error. Do not mix "texting" language into academic essays!!!) suppose parents play an important role in solving this issue.

Many children are more vulnerable to social evils. The more modern (wrong word. What do you mean by "modern" life?) the life is, the more parents go out for work, so they grually neglect their children. The students usually stay at home alone without participating in outdoor activities. Besides, they can be spoilt by mass media. Another reason is their parents' indulgence, (comma splice error) some parents do not teach them typical standards of society ( Do you mean that parents should teach these ways of living that make the kids disrespectful, egotistical and selfish? ) which can make them self-centered, egocentric and lack proper respect for other people. Competitiveness in schools also influence the behaviours of students. Students sometime feel jealous of others' achievements so that they do something negative hurtful to their friends.

It is true that, Parents' training is the best solution to this problem (Do you mean that parents should take parenting classes?). They should spend more time with their children, (missing word) educate them about the importance of appropriate manners. In addition, parents should also explain the bad effects the children can cause. Students are the people who have many difficulties at schools, so parents ought to lend a sympathetic ear to the children and give them favorable advice. It not only create a good relationship among the family but also makes students respect the parents.

Last but not least, government should support parents in educating the children. Moreover, parents and governments must be the pioneers in performing what they training thể children.


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