The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

My essay:

The bar chart shows the number of females who have finished school and wanted to go into higher education. These women have selected from five countries: the UK, the USA, Canada, Japan and Germany in the years 1970 and 2005.

Overall, the number of these women who entered the higher degrees, were less than the women in 2005, exception for Canadian's.

As shown, the most significant change was in the UK, where increased from about 35% to 60% (the highest percentage). Japan was the second country to change, where the proportion of female school leavers have doubled (40%). Canadian women going into further education remained the same at 60 percent between the two years and this equals to the UK's women's in 2005, as the highest percentage.

The USA's women increased almost 15%,from 40% in 1970 that it was a little under the UK's and Canadian's females number. The least change was for Germany, around 5 % from 50%.

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