Topic:

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams.

How true do you think this statement is?

What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?


Essay:

It is believed that constant traffic congestion in many cities around the globe cause by the car ownership become increasingly common over the past thirty years. I agree with this statement and the goverment should have take action to encourage people to use other means of transport.

It is undoubt that many traffic jams in the urban area are caused by person automobiles. Moreover, the rapidly increasing in population that lead to the increasingly demand of having a car in many households. This is a social problem in many economical cities in the world like New York, Toronto, London where having a milions of residents and it is unlikely to solve because people are prefer to own a car or reside near the workplace rather than taking other means of transports. While automobile brand will continue to introduce more affordable car to the market, the efficetive solution is encouraging people to use other kind of transports.

In order to resolve this issue, the local authority should have action to discourage people from commuting by personal automobile. Since the demand to commute are increasingly become common, stimulating people to use other kind of transports is an effective solution. The goverment can provide some discounts on the cost of public transport to not only student but also worker to stimulate the residents. Moreover, there is a raise of using electric scooter or e-bicycle to commute in many developed city. Thus, this also is a potential solution for local authority that they can introduce either more lanes or wider lanes for cyclists on the street in many downtown. A good example is in downtown of Toronto where almost major streets having lane for bicycle or scooter only and that reducing a lot of personal vechical on the road.

In conclusion, the demand of car ownership is rapidly increase in many urban areas around the world over the past thirty year which is a major reason of traffic jams. In order to solve this problem the local authorities have to commit to periodically maintain and improve the quality of public transports and constructions which encourage people to use other kind of transports.

You need to study grammar, especially singular/plural nouns and the correct verb forms. You make many mistakes. The yellow highlighting shows mostly wrong noun forms or wrong verb forms.


It is believed that constant traffic congestion in many cities around the globe cause by the car ownership (poor English) become (wrong verb form) increasingly common over the past thirty years. I agree with this statement and the goverment (wrong spelling) should have take (wrong verb form) action to encourage people to use other means of transport.

It is undoubt (invalid word) that many traffic jams in the urban area are caused by person (wrong word) automobiles. Moreover, the rapidly increasing in population (wrong usage) that lead to the increasingly (wrong word. An adverb does not modify an noun.) demand of having a car in most many households. This is a social problem in many economical (wrong word) cities in the world like New York, Toronto, London (ungrammatical series) where having a milions (wrong usage and spelling) of residents and it is unlikely to solve (wrong verb form) because people are prefer (wrong verb form) to own a car or reside near the workplace rather than taking other means of transportation. While automobile brand (wrong word) will continue to introduce more affordable car (wrong form) to the market, the efficetive solution is encouraging people to use other kind (wrong form) of transportation.

In order to resolve this problem issue, the local authority should have (wrong verb) action to discourage people from commuting by personal automobile. (wrong form) Since the demand to commute are (wrong verb form) increasingly become (wrong verb form) common, stimulating people to use other kind (wrong form) of transportation transports is an effective solution. The goverment can provide some discounts on the cost of public transport to not only student (wrong form) but also worker (wrong form) to stimulate (wrong verb) the residents. Moreover, there is a raise (wrong word) of using electric scooter (wrong form) or e-bicycle (wrong form) to commute in many developed city. (wrong form) Thus, this also is a potential solution for local authority that they can introduce either more lanes or wider lanes for cyclists on the street in many downtown. (wrong form and wrong usage.) A good example is in downtown of Toronto where almost (wrong usage - an "almost major" street is a minor street. But that is bad English ) major streets having (wrong verb form) lane for bicycle (wrong form) or scooter only and that reducing (wrong verb form) a lot of personal vechical (wrong form and wrong spelling) on the road.

In conclusion, the demand of car ownership is rapidly increase (wrong verb form) in many urban areas around the world over the past thirty year (wrong form) which is a major reason of traffic jams. In order to solve this problem the local authorities have to commit to periodically maintain and improve the quality of public transports and constructions which encourage people to use other kind of transports.

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Constant traffic congestion in many cities around the globe caused by an increase in car ownership has become more common over the past thirty years.

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