Tell us about one of your heroes (this could be a fictional character or a real person) and why he or she inspires you.

I believe that we all have a real-life hero, and that person to me is my mother. When asked " who is your hero?", it occurs to me that most people would talk about their fictional heroes such as Spiderman, Ironman. Nevertheless, in my opinion, my mother is the person whose traits surpass all the criteria needed for a superhero. My hero doesn't wear a cape like Superman but she is the person who believes in me unconditionally; for example, when I doubted that I would pass my exams, she always had faith in me and helped me through those tough days. My mother is not a perfect hero, but she is a wise woman. I used to think that a job is all about the salary, but my mom changes the way I think; she taught me that a job is valuable only when I can help those who are in need.

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