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Hello. I'm starting to prepare for my coming up Academic IELTS exam. Now, I am struggling with the writing task. I hope somebody will please review this for me so that I can improve myself. I will really appriciate it Emotion: smile

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The bar graph and table show amount of time both male and female in Great Britain use on their household chores. Female tend to spend more time in every chores except gardening, pet caring, and maintenance job.

female spends over twice as much time as male does on these following take including cooking, house cleaning, child caring, and clothing. Female spends 74 minutes on cooking, 58 minutes on house cleaning, 45 minutes on child caring, and 25 minutes on clothing.

On the other hand, there are some tasks that male spends more than female each day. Male spends 28.8 minutes more than female on Gardening and pet caring task. Male also takes longer time on Maintenance odd job with 26 minutes per day while female takes on 9.5 minutes.

In total, female spend more time in household task than male. The longest task that female spends on is kitchen task which. Unlike female, the longest task that male spends time on is Gardening and pet care which take 49.5 minutes. The least time that female spends time on is maintenance job, but male spends least time on clothing task.
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The bar graph and table show the amount of time both males and females in Great Britain use on their household chores. Females tend to spend more time on every chore except gardening, pet care, and maintenance jobs.

Females spend over twice as much time as males do on the following tasks: including cooking, house cleaning, child care, and clothing. Females spend 74 minutes on cooking, 58 minutes on house cleaning, 45 minutes on child care, and 25 minutes on clothing.

On the other hand, there are some tasks that males spend more time on than females each day. Males spend 28.8 minutes more than females on gardening and pet care task. Males also take longer time on maintenance odd jobs with 26 minutes per day while females take only 9.5 minutes.

In total, females spend more time on household tasks than males. The longest task that female spends on is kitchen task which. Unlike females, the longest task that males spend time on is gardening and pet care which take 49.5 minutes. The least time that females spend time on a task is maintenance jobs, but males spend the least time on clothing task.

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Dear MalRey,

thankyou very much for your help Emotion: smile That's really help me a lot!