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Topic: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction:

It is said that social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram have had many detrimentals on both every single person and society. In my opinion, these social networking sites play a crucial in human's life in the flat world now, however, they have some backwards.

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On the one hand, social networking sites have had many advantages on individual people and social as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends over the world but also set up a close relationship through these platforms. Having more close relationships around the world has a beneficial influence on friendship among countries. For instance, if some countries have any minor conflicts that lead the discord among them, their society as well as individual people would speak up to protect each other. In addition, people could find the best jobs for them on LinkedIn or some social media with a finger-tips. They just need to post their profile and look for a suitable job for them or some companies which are having vacancy invite them to assume this position.

On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on each person and society as a whole can only be seen as negative. The first reason is that many trash informations which are existing in Facebook or the others could be a waste of time for individuals and even society because they have to spend time administrative penalize their own wrong information. The next one, this situation is so popular on that day, the more technologies developed, the less interaction among people over the world. Taking one example, having facebook and other social media, it is easy to contact with friends through messenger, especially video call, that causes no meet in the reality among people or community as well.

On the one hand, social networking sites have had many advantages on for individual people and social society as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends all over the world but also set up a close establish personal and professional relationships through these platforms. [ 1] Having more close relationships around the world has a beneficial influence on friendship among countries. [ 2] For instance, if some countries have any minor conflicts that lead the discord among them, their society as well as individual people would speak up to protect each other. In addition, people could find the best jobs for them on LinkedIn or some social media website with just the click of a button. a finger-tips. They just need to post their create a profile, post their CV and look for a suitable job. for them or some Similarly, companies and other employers which are having vacancy can search through profiles and invite suitable candidates for an interview. them to assume this position. [ 3]

[ 4] On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on each person and society as a whole can only be seen as also have negative impacts. The first reason is that many trash informations which are existing in people waste a lot of time on Facebook instead of doing something productive like working or studying. or the others could be a waste of time for individuals and even society because they have to spend time administrative penalize their own wrong information. The next one, this situation is so popular on that day, In addition, the more time people spend online, technologies developed, the less interaction among they have with other people, and that can impair their social skills. [ 5] over the world. Taking one example, having facebook and other social media, it is easy to contact with friends through messenger, especially video call, that causes no meet in the reality among people or community as well. [ 6]

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[ 1]: Avoid repetition.

[ 2]: I don’t understand that sentence, and it’s not an example of what you just mentioned.

[ 3]: If you want to add another point, you can mention that people can use social media websites to do business (buy and sell).

[ 4]: Don’t complicate your writing, especially topic sentences.

[ 5]: That is poorly worded. Keep your sentences short and simple.

[ 6]: If you want to add an extra point to that paragraph, talk about how anyone can say anything on Facebook; i.e. there’s no way of verifying the information.

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On the one hand, social networking sites have many advantages for individual people and society as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends all over the world but also establish personal and professional relationships through these platforms. For instance, many love relationships begin from Twitter like Nick Jonas and Priyanka Chopra. A male singer met a female model on Twitter in 2017 then they started to fall in love and married in 2018 .In addition, people could find jobs on LinkedIn or some social media website with just the click of a button. They just need to create a profile, post their CV and look for a suitable job. Similarly, companies and other employers can search through profiles and invite suitable candidates for an interview. It is the best way in the jobs search market today.

On the other hand, Facebook and other social networking sites could also have negative impacts. The first is that many people waste a lot of time on Facebook instead of doing something productive like working or studying. Besides, the more time people spend online, the less interaction they have with other people, and that can impair their social skills. Moreover, people would be under pressure from negative posts by extreme ingredients. Those people, therefore, feel stressed, obsessed and even live with fear that their health is getting worse and worse. Hence, they avoid using social media as soon as possible.

On the one hand, social networking sites have many advantages for individual people and society as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends all over the world but also establish personal and professional relationships through these platforms. For instance, many love relationships begin from Twitter like the romance between the singer Nick Jonas and the model Priyanka Chopra, . A male singer met a female model who on Twitter in 2017, then they started to fall in love and married in 2018. In addition, people could find jobs on LinkedIn or some social media website with just the click of a button. They just need to create a profile, post their CV and look for a suitable job. Similarly, companies and other employers can search through profiles and invite suitable candidates for an interview. It is the best way in the job search market today.

On the other hand, Facebook and other social networking sites could also have negative impacts. The first is that many people waste a lot of time on Facebook instead of doing something productive like working or studying. Besides, the more time people spend online, the less interaction they have with other people, and that can impair their social skills. Moreover, because anyone can say anything on social media, it is often difficult to verify the information on such platforms. people would be under pressure from negative posts by extreme ingredients. Those people, therefore, feel stressed, obsessed and even live with fear that their health is getting worse and worse. Hence, they avoid using social media as soon as possible.

I should need one conclusive sentence for the end of body paragraph 2, right ?

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On the one hand, social networking sites have many advantages for individual people and society as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends all over the world but also establish personal and professional relationships through these platforms. For instance, many love relationships begin from Twitter like the romance between the singer Nick Jonas and the model Priyanka Chopra, who on Twitter in 2017, started to fall in love and married in 2018. In addition, people could find jobs on LinkedIn or some social media website with just the click of a button. They just need to create a profile, post their CV and look for a suitable job. Similarly, companies and other employers can search through profiles and invite suitable candidates for an interview. It is the best way in the job market today.


On the other hand, Facebook and other social networking sites could also have negative impacts. The first is that many people waste a lot of time on Facebook instead of doing something productive like working or studying. Besides, the more time people spend online, the less interaction they have with other people, and that can impair their social skills. Moreover, because anyone can say anything on social media, it is often difficult to verify the information on such platforms. Hence, Facebook and others users should be carefully about selecting informations that could be impact on their usual life.

On the one hand, social networking sites have many advantages for individual people and society as well. Facebook, Twitter or Instagram help people not only connect with friends all over the world but also establish personal and professional relationships through these platforms. For instance, many love relationships begin from Twitter like the romance between the singer Nick Jonas and the model Priyanka Chopra, who on Twitter in 2017, started to fall in love and married in 2018. In addition, people could find jobs on LinkedIn or some social media website with just the click of a button. They just need to create a profile, post their CV and look for a suitable job. Similarly, companies and other employers can search through profiles and invite suitable candidates for an interview. It is the best way in the job market today.

On the other hand, Facebook and other social networking sites could also have negative impacts. The first is that many people waste a lot of time on Facebook instead of doing something productive like working or studying. Besides, the more time people spend online, the less interaction they have with other people, and that can impair their social skills. Moreover, because anyone can say anything on social media, it is often difficult to verify the information on such platforms. Hence, Facebook and others users should be carefully careful and selective about what to trust on such websites. selecting informations that could be impact on their usual life.

I should need one conclusive concluding sentence for the end of body paragraph 2, right?

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You don’t actually need one, but see above.

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So is it the complete body paragraph?

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So is it the complete are the body paragraphs done?

Yes. Now you need the introduction and conclusion.

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