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Topic: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction:

It is said that social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram have had many detrimentals on both every single person and society. In my opinion, these social networking sites play a crucial in human's life in the flat world now, however, they have some backwards.

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Comments  (Page 3) 

In conclusion, social networking sites have either beneficial or detrimental effects on each person and society as well. Therefore, users who use such those platforms need to pay more attention in exploiting good things and avoiding bad ones.

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In conclusion, despite the detrimental effects that social networking sites bring such as wasting time or negative information, these platforms still help individual people and societies as well not only build close relationships but also engage in suitable jobs.

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Đức Trần

In conclusion, despite the detrimental effects that social networking sites bring disadvantages such as wasting time or negative providing unreliable information, these social media platforms still help individual people and societies as well not only build close relationships but also benefit economically. engage in suitable jobs.

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