Topic:

Some schools now offer courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

My essay:

In this day and age, online education has been increasingly popular in schools due to the advent of Internet. Although it has brought out a lot of benefits, its negative side should not be neglected.

The main benefit of schools’ online courses is that students can learn in a flexible way. Some students are engaged in part- time jobs to pay tuition fees and plenty of expense or to have working experience, therefore, they do not have enough time to attend conventional classes. Nonetheless, by registering for the online courses, they are able to reach the balance between study and work. In addition, online education enables students to learn regardless of location. Many of them live far from the schools but they can still study all the lessons in their curriculum.

On the other hand, I believe that it is far more inconvenient for students to participate in Internet-based learning offered by their schools. First, there is no face-to-face communication between teachers and learners. They only chat with others through the Internet without direct interaction or some activities like discussion or presentation. Thus, the lessons will become tedious and make students lose the motivation in learning. Second, schools are unable to manage their students strictly. Teachers cannot know exactly whether their students are learning or not. Instead, they may play online games or watch movies, which is detrimental to their acquiring knowledge.

In conclusion, while technological advancements in education is a great leap for the world, I think that online education is such a negative development for students.

Topic:

Some schools now offer courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

My essay:

In light of the latest technological advancements, multiple educational institutes have now embraced a brand new method of studying which is online education. From my standpoint, I believe that the benefits of this development far outweigh any of its shortcomings.

Firstly, e-learning gives a big advantage to students when it comes to time and finance. By conducting lessons through virtual means, schools present the opportunities of a more flexible timing and less expense tuition fees. This method also gives out the beneficial aid to those who work and study at the same time. What’s more, learners may also acquire new skills and accumulate their knowledge level at their own pace because they can replay the recorded lessons at any given moment.

Secondly, the strength of Internet-based schooling lies in the fact that everyone can attend the lecture regardless of any geographical restraints. Especially in the midst of the pandemic, there’s only so many people who can opt for classroom teaching. Furthermore, distance learning has made it possible for the elderly and housewives to continue their pursuit of educational wisdom from home.

In conclusion, holding online courses and lectures is a great decision coming from educational establishments. I believe that this practice should be continued in the future as the technology advances forward.

Đinh Phương LinhIn this day and age, online education has been increasingly popular in schools due to the advent of Internet.

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Firstly, First, e-learning (This is not a formal word. You need to define it first. I edited your first paragraph as an example.) gives a big advantage to students when it comes to time and finance. By conducting lessons through virtually, rather than in person, means, schools present offer the opportunities of a more flexible timing and less expense tuition fees. (Here is a way to increase your word count and to better develop the argument.) Tuition can be reduced without the school losing any income because the number of students in one course is not limited to physical lecture hall space. In fact, they may substantially increase their earnings, and use it to improve the quality of the classes by hiring the best professors and more tutors to provide individual assistance. This method also benefits gives out the beneficial aid to those who work and study at the same time, because they can replay the recorded lessons at any given moment. What’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) more, by reviewing the lecture multiple times, learners may also acquire new skills and accumulate their knowledge level (wrong word) at their own pace because they can replay the recorded lessons at any given moment.

Secondly, Second, the strength of Internet-based schooling lies in the fact that everyone can attend the lecture regardless of any geographical constraints. restraints. (wrong word - a restraint is a strap that prevents you from moving.) Especially in the midst of the pandemic, there’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing. Also, it is the wrong verb form) )only so many people who can opt for classroom instruction. teaching. Furthermore, distance learning has made it possible for the elderly and housewives to continue their education or audit classes that pique their interests pursuit of educational wisdom from home.

In conclusion, holding online courses and lectures is a great decision coming from educational establishments. (You need to restate your thesis and summarize your points. Do not add new information.)

I believe that this practice should be continued in the future as the technology advances forward.

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