Topic: Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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People’s opinions vary as to whether team study is more useful than individual study for pupils. While there are benefits to being self-educated, I think that studying with friends is the most effective.

In terms of studying in groups, firstly, work can be done easily. Because it is allocated among members and each one specializes in a certain task so they work more efficiently. Moreover, not only does cooperation help process a heavy workload at once but only raise the learning motivation of each member as they have to be aware of their responsibility when they study in a group. Secondly, the knowledge of members is improved. When a teammate makes mistakes, other people will correct them and explain why it is wrong for him to understand. Next, teamwork is a crucial social skill. During cooperation to study, students have opportunities to enhance their soft skills such as time management skill, argument skill, critical thinking skill, etc. These skills play an important role in working in the future.

On the other hand, studying alone doesn’t bring more benefits than that. One person takes responsibility for all work, so it takes more hours to finish. Then, when students do some hard tasks, they don’t have teammates to do together and have to solve the problem theirself. Therefore, they can’t expand their knowledge. Next, it is obvious that students are not able to improve those social skills. That makes them difficult to get a job.

In conclusion, both individual and group study can be useful under different circumstances, but I generally prefer to work with others as part of a team.

People’s opinions vary as to whether team study is more useful than individual study for pupils. While there are benefits to being self-educated, I think that studying with friends is the most effective.


In terms of studying in groups, firstly, work can be done easily. Because it is allocated among members and each one specializes in a certain task so they work more efficiently. Moreover, not only does cooperation help process a heavy workload at once but only raise the learning motivation of each member as they have to be aware of their responsibility when they study in a group. Secondly, the knowledge of members is improved. When a teammate makes mistakes, other people will correct them and explain why it is wrong for him to understand. Next, teamwork is a crucial social skill. During cooperation to study, students have opportunities to enhance their soft skills such as time management skill, argument skill, critical thinking skill, etc. These skills play an important role in working in the future.


On the other hand, studying alone doesn’t bring more benefits than that. One person takes responsibility for all work, so it takes more hours to finish. Then, when students do some hard tasks, they don’t have teammates to do together and have to solve the problem theirself. Therefore, they can’t expand their knowledge. Next, it is obvious that students are not able to improve those social skills. That makes them difficult to get a job.


In conclusion, both individual and group study can be useful under different circumstances, but I generally prefer to work with others as part of a team.

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People’s opinions vary as to whether team study is more useful than individual study for pupils. (Do you really mean "pupils"?) While there are benefits to being self-educated, (Self-educated means that you have never attended a school. You studied at home by yourself.) I think that studying with friends is the most effective.


These are pupils.

These are students.

First, when one studies in a group, In terms of studying in groups, firstly, work can be done easily. Because it is allocated among members and each one specializes in a certain task (I do not understand your point here. Do you mean that when learning math, one specializes in addition, another in subtraction, another in multiplication? So if the homework has a mixture of math problems, each member only calculates their specialties? ) so they work more efficiently. (The topic is learning subject matter, not doing a project.) Moreover, not only does cooperation help process a heavy workload (off-topic) at once but only raise the learning motivation of each member as they have to be aware of their responsibility when they study in a group. Secondly, Second, the knowledge of members is improved. When a teammate makes mistakes, other people will correct them and explain why it is wrong for him to understand. Next, Third, (when you begin a set of transition words, you need to use it consistently) teamwork is a crucial social skill. During If students cooperate, they cooperation to study, students have opportunities to enhance practice their soft skills such as time management skill, argumentation, skill, critical thinking skill, etc. (Do not use ellipses, "etc." or phrases like "and so on" in formal writing.) These skills play an important role in working in the a future career.


On the other hand, studying alone doesn’t (do not use contractions in formal writing.) bring more benefits than that. One person takes responsibility for all his homework, so it takes more hours to finish. Then, when students do some hard tasks, they don’t have teammates to solve problems do together and have to solve them problem theirself. Therefore, they can’t expand their knowledge. Next, it is obvious that students are not able to improve those social skills. That makes them (wrong pronoun) difficult to get a job.


In conclusion, both individual and group study can be useful under different circumstances, but I generally prefer to work with others as part of a team.