The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami, Florida by all full-time member over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.



The bar graph plots how male and female utilized a health society in Miami, Florida regularly during twelve months the previous year. The two pie charts gives details about the members’ age group (21-45, 65+, others) by gender.

In general, more men employed this fitness center than women and the trend was downward, with the most usage recorded from June to September, as there were above 800 men and 700 women having access to it then the number of these two categories slightly deteriorated. Individuals between the age of 21 and 45 made use of the health club the most, accounting for over one half of the total membership. The proportions of the two pie charts for each age bracket were approximately the same.

Over the first five months, whereas the utilization of female were quite stable, marginally increasing from 500 in January and February to roughly 580 in March, April, and May, that of male fluctuated a bit, dropping then rising steadily to beyond a sizable 700. In the next four months, the health society’s usage reached the peak but the pattern remained unchanged: a consistent disparity of around 100 people between men and women. However, from October to December, the trend did not continue since female and male’s using decrease to the similar point as in January, and April respectively. There was not much discrepancy between male and female membership by age: age range from 21-45 occupied a vast majority of 55% and 51% sequentially, 65+ comprised exactly a quarter and near one third while others made up of a mere one in five and 17%.

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The bar graph plots how male and female utilized (poor English and inaccurate. What is plotted on the bar chart?) a health society(wrong word) in Miami, Florida regularly (There is no indication that these were only the regular attendees) during for each of the twelve months during the previous year. The two pie charts gives details (That is not good) about the members’ age group (21-45, 65+, others) by gender.

In general, more men used/visited/frequented employed this fitness center than women and the trend was downward, (That is incorrect. The numbers did not consistently decrease.) with the most usage recorded from June to September, as there were above 800 men and 700 women having access to it then the number of these two categories slightly deteriorated. (Do not write details in the "overview". This sentence is too long and verbose. Write clearly.) Individuals between the age of 21 and 45 made use of the health club (That is not accurate. There is no frequency by age range. on these plots.) the most, accounting for over one half of the total membership. The proportions of the two pie charts for each age bracket (unnatural) were approximately the same.

Over the first five months, whereas the utilization of female (poor English) were (wrong verb form) quite stable, (Wrong word) marginally increasing from 500 in January and February to roughly 580 in March, April, and May, that of male (unnatural) fluctuated (wrong word. Read my advice) a bit, dropping then rising steadily to beyond a sizable 700. (unnatural) In the next four months, the health society’s (wrong phrase) usage reached the peak but the pattern remained unchanged: a consistent disparity of around 100 people between men and women. (unnatural) However, from October to December, the trend did not continue since female and male’s using (Using relates to illegal drugs. It is not appropriate here.) decrease to the similar point as in January, and April respectively. There was not much discrepancy between male and female membership by age: age range from 21-45 occupied (wrong word) a vast (wrong word. A majority is 50%. a vast majority is two-thirds or more.) majority of 55% and 51% sequentially, (wrong word) 65+ comprised exactly a quarter and near one third while others made up of a mere (unnatural) one in five and 17%.

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The bar chart plots the monthly attendance numbers for men and women at a health club in Miami, Florida last year. The two pie charts give the age distribution of the male and female members in three age brackets, adults (21-45), seniors (65 and older) and all others.

Overall, there were more men attendees than women every month. The curves for men and women were highly correlated, with lows in the winter months and highs in the summer. The age distributions of males and females were very similar.

In the winter, December through February, an average of 570 men and 500 women came to the club. From March through May, 580 women visited each month, and an increasing number of men: 590, 650, and 710. Peak season occurred June through September with an average of about 820 men and 710 women. Numbers declined in the fall, but they were higher than in the spring. In terms of age, one-third of the women and a quarter of the men members were 65+; the majority (51-55%) were in the 21-45 age group.