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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Recently, the use of artificial intelligence to drive cars has become increasingly common. This is mainly due to advancements in technology and it should be viewed as a positive development because it reduces road accidents.


AI has reached a point where it can safely control a vehicle. This is because scientists have developed algorithms which can analyze the collected data, such as the number of cars on the road or the color of the traffic light. For instance, AI will observe whether the color of the traffic light is green or red in order to decide to continue or stop driving. Beside advanced technologies, drivers’ need to relax and let AI does its job is also a factor contributing to the popularity of self-driving cars.


This is a positive development because of several reasons. First, road accidents can be reduced with the assistance of AI. It will notice the possible accidents and help you avoid that. For instance, when your car is driving near another one on the road, AI will notice and keep an appropriate distance from it. This benefits the old and those who drink alcohol when they are behind the wheel as AI will replace them to drive safely. Second, AI also has the function of navigating. It can help us find the fastest route to reach our destination and control the car to move in the correct direction. This saves time and we can do whatever we want while seating on the car.


In conclusion, thanks to the development of technology, people are now driving safer and avoid car accidents with the help of AI.

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This is a positive development because of several reasons. First, road accidents can be reduced with the assistance of AI. It will notice road hazards or conditions which could cause an accident and avoid them. the possible accidents and help you avoid that. For instance, when your car is driving traveling near another one on the road, AI will notice and keep an appropriate distance from it. This benefits the elderly old and those who drink alcohol at a fun party when they are behind the wheel (In most countries, it is illegal to sip on a bottle of beer while you are driving a car.) as AI will take them home replace (wrong word) them to drive safely. Second, AI also has the function of navigating. It can help us find the fastest route to reach our destination and control the car to follow that route and make necessary adjustments along the way. move in the correct direction. This saves time and we can do whatever we want while seating on the car.


In conclusion, thanks to the development of technology, (Avoid this phrase. It is rather nonsense, because humans have been developing technology for hundreds of thousands of years.) computing algorithms, sensors, and global positioning systems, people are now driving safer and avoiding car accidents with the help of AI.


These are examples of technological developments. We have been developing technology for thousands upon thousands of years. It has never stopped. We will always be developing new technologies.