My topic: Children should be encouraged to build a network of close acquaintances instead of befriending a wide range of people without any close relationship. Discuss and give your own opinion.


My essay:

Given mounting concern regarding children’s development, the issue of their social relationships has garnered ample attention. Regarding this matter, a school of thought holds that children are more beneficial from a handful of close friends rather than numerous social ones. This essay is going to provide in-depth knowledge in such a viewpoint before presenting my perspective.

To commence with, it is reasonable why establishing intimate relationships with a small group of people is advocated. First and foremost, close friends are able to offer unconditional support. Long-lasting relationship is precursor to the formation of sympathy and sincerity, hence, best friends are willing to offer reliable assistance and secure aid, especially in emergency cases. In contrast, in superficial friendship, personal benefits are still given priority. Second, exposure to close friendship empowers people to live a true life. Obviously, when interacting with strangers, all individuals are inclined to pretend to be virtuous and immaculate, despite not their true personality of interest. Meanwhile, socializing with long-term friends allows people to behave more comfortably as we have clearly known each other’s strengths and weaknesses. Moreover, intimate friends tend to give compliments, encouragement and constructive feedback without any prejudicial judgements.

Thanks to that, children would have an accurate acknowledgment of their ability and restrictions, thus taking corresponding actions to maintain and improve.

Nevertheless, it is necessary for children to widen their circles of social friends as much as possible. Especially in tertiary pursuits, befriending with other students from different majors, ranging from biology, chemicals, IT to economics, politics afford people abundant opportunities to enrich their knowledge about various subjects. These relationships may not be useful in your personal life but do wonders for your social ones, particularly in job finding and promotion in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that children should be encouraged to establish close rapport with a certain number of friends rather than forming countless relationships without taking intimacy into consideration.

My topic:

Children should be encouraged to build a network of close acquaintances instead of befriending a wide range of people without any close relationship. Discuss and give your own opinion.


My essay:


Given mounting concern regarding children’s development, the issue of their social relationships has garnered ample attention. Regarding this matter, a school of thought holds that children are more beneficial from a handful of close friends rather than numerous social ones. This essay is going to provide in-depth knowledge in such a viewpoint before presenting my perspective.


To commence with, it is reasonable why establishing intimate relationships with a small group of people is advocated. First and foremost, close friends are able to offer unconditional support. Long-lasting relationship is precursor to the formation of sympathy and sincerity, hence, best friends are willing to offer reliable assistance and secure aid, especially in emergency cases. In contrast, in superficial friendship, personal benefits are still given priority. Second, exposure to close friendship empowers people to live a true life. Obviously, when interacting with strangers, all individuals are inclined to pretend to be virtuous and immaculate, despite not their true personality of interest. Meanwhile, socializing with long-term friends allows people to behave more comfortably as we have clearly known each other’s strengths and weaknesses. Moreover, intimate friends tend to give compliments, encouragement and constructive feedback without any prejudicial judgements.

Thanks to that, children would have an accurate acknowledgment of their ability and restrictions, thus taking corresponding actions to maintain and improve.


Nevertheless, it is necessary for children to widen their circles of social friends as much as possible. Especially in tertiary pursuits, befriending with other students from different majors, ranging from biology, chemicals, IT to economics, politics afford people abundant opportunities to enrich their knowledge about various subjects. These relationships may not be useful in your personal life but do wonders for your social ones, particularly in job finding and promotion in the future.


In conclusion, I believe that children should be encouraged to establish close rapport with a certain number of friends rather than forming countless relationships without taking intimacy into consideration.

One of you is copying another student's essay and posting it. That is very bad behavior.

Every student needs to do their work independently and not plagiarize someone else's work.