The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps depict the layout of a university sports centre now and after some proposed modifications.



Overall, the exterior of the complex is expected to be added to the main building and converted into six new features. In particular, besides swimming and gym workout, the centre is planned to also offer facilities for dancing, shopping and having coffee.



Regarding the indoor of the centre, the entrance to the main building is on the south, and directly behind it is reception. Running along the west, east and north sides of the building are a changing room, seating place and a gym, respectively. These facilities will remain unchanged, except for the gym, which will be expanded eastwards.



Exteriorly, there are two outdoor courts on the west and east, which will be demolished. In their place, there will be a leisure pool on the west, with a changing room and a sports shop to the south of the pool. In addition, there will be a new sports hall to the east of the seating area. To the east of the hall is two dance studios, and to the south are a café and a changing room.

The two [ 1] maps diagrams depict the layout of a university sports centre now and after some proposed modifications.

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Overall, the exterior of the complex is expected to be added to the main building and converted into six new features. In particular, besides the centre is set to expand with new facilities added, including a swimming pool and a sports hall. gym workout, the centre is planned to also offer facilities for dancing, shopping and having coffee.

Regarding the indoor of the centre, At present, the entrance to the main building is on in the south, and directly behind it is the reception. Running along the west, east and north sides of the building are a changing room, seating place and a gym, respectively. These facilities will remain unchanged, except for the gym, which will be expanded eastwards.

[ 3] Exteriorly, Moreover, there are two outdoor courts on in the west and east, which will be demolished. In their place, there will be a leisure pool on in the west, with a changing room and a sports shop to the south of the pool. In addition, there will be a new sports hall to the east of the seating area. To the east of the hall is will be two dance studios, and to the south are a café and a changing room will be added.

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[ 1]: Those are not maps.

[ 2]: Use one, not two blank lines to separate your paragraphs.

[ 3]: Do not use that word.

Thank you a lot.

But many IELTS teachers such as Simon use the word "map" in this type of question. I do not know if it is fine to use in an IELTS test.

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No, you shouldn't. Use "diagram", "picture", or "plan" instead.