The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK citiy between 1989 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.



My essay:

The diagram indiates the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009.

In general, the restaurants, hotels job was the highest and the travel and tours was the lowest among three group jobs.

In particular, from 1989 to 2004, the quantities of people in the restaurants hotel sharply increased from 1100 to 1600, but from 2004 to 2009, this figure decreased to approximately 1580. The second popular jobs which was sport and leisure maintained unstably. From 1989 to 1999, these jobs lightly reduced from 800 to nearly 780 and after that gradually rised to 820. In the later period, it gradually declined to 700. The last jobs which was travel and tours gradually increased from 1989 to 1994 at 820 and after that it sharply decreased from 820 to nearly 410.

You wrote 138 words. The minimum for the task is 150. Your score will be decreased for that.



The diagram (What kind of diagram?) indiates the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009.

In general, the restaurants, hotels job (This means one job. One job cannot be described as "high") was the highest and the travel and tours was the lowest among three group jobs. (Wrong word order)

In particular, from 1989 to 2004, the quantities (Wrong word) of people (Wrong word) in the restaurants hotel sharply increased by more than 50% from 1100 to 1600, but from 2004 to 2009, this figure it decreased to approximately 1580. The second popular jobs which was sport and leisure maintained unstably. From 1989 to 1999, these jobs lightly reduced (Jobs do not reduce. It is the number of jobs that goes down.) from 800 to nearly 780 and after that gradually rised to 820. In the later period, it gradually declined to 700. The last jobs which was travel and tours gradually increased from 1989 to 1994 at 820 and after that it sharply decreased by half from 820 to nearly 410.