the question was about the WWE and i wrote this :

I think WWE is a combination between sport and showbiz that what i can conclude from its name (Wrestling Entertainment).

If you look at the human history you can see that consuming passion for fighting and wrestling and Mr. Mcmahon present this concept in a civilized and entertaining way, for me I like the show I prefer it to watching movies or even some real sports ,in fact it is like action movie so I don't think it is a real fight but at the same time we see a real moves and in my opinion WWE has its own rules and the wrestlers act according to this rules.

I like Stone Cold very much, he rattles the show and make it vibrant and energetic and it is a loss for WWE not having him at the show.
Hi,

the question was about the WWE and i wrote this : Please tell us the question.

I think WWE is a combination between sport and showbiz that what i can conclude from its name (Wrestling Entertainment). You need to divide this into two sentences. Each sentence must start with a capital letter and end with a period.

If you look at the human history you can see that consuming passion for fighting and wrestling and Mr. Mcmahon present this concept in a civilized and entertaining way, for me I like the show I prefer it to watching movies or even some real sports ,in fact it is like action movie so I don't think it is a real fight but at the same time we see a real moves and in my opinion WWE has its own rules and the wrestlers act according to this rules. You need to divide this into several sentences.

I like Stone Cold very much, he rattles the show and make it vibrant and energetic and it is a loss for WWE not having him at the show. You need to divide this into two or three sentences.

If you do this and repost it, we can have a look for other ways to improve your writing.Emotion: smile

Best wishes, Clive
CliveHi,

the question was about the WWE and i wrote this : Please tell us the question.

Hi Clive :

i considered your notes and i hope the following is what you meant:

What is your opinion about WWE ? Is it fake or violent ? who is your favorite wrestler?

I think WWE is a combination between sport and showbiz. That what i can conclude from its name (Wrestling Entertainment).

If you look at the human history you can see that consuming passion for fighting and wrestling and Mr. Mcmahon (chairman of WWE) present this concept in a civilized and entertaining way.

For me I like the show I prefer it to watching movies or even some real sports although it's going violent sometimes.

In fact it is like action movie so I don't think it is a real fight but at the same time we see a real moves and in my opinion WWE has its own rules and the wrestlers act according to this rules.

I like Stone Cold very much, he rattles the show and make it vibrant and energetic and he deserves to be in WWE hall of fame.

It is a loss for WWE not having him at the show.
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Hi again,

This is much easier to read now that you have made more sentences. Here are some edits.

Clive

What is your opinion about the WWE ? Is it fake or violent ? Who is your favorite wrestler?

I think the WWE is a combination between of sport and showbiz. That is what I can conclude from its name (Wrestling Entertainment).

If you look at the human history, you can see that consuming passion for fighting and wrestling, and Mr. Mcmahon (chairman of WWE) presents this concept in a civilized and entertaining way.

For me, I like the show. I prefer it to watching movies or even some real sports although it's going it becomes violent sometimes.

In fact, it is like an action movie so I don't think it is a real fight. Bt at the same time we see a real moves and in my opinion the WWE has its own rules and the wrestlers act according to these rules.

I like Stone Cold very much. He rattles the show and makes it vibrant and energetic, and he deserves to be in the WWE hall of fame.

It is a loss for the WWE not having him at the show.