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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing the school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, taking leave for a year after finishing the school and before taking and admission in college is being preferred by the students. Doing this by students has its advantage and disadvantage. The following essay takes a look at both sides.

It is worth considering a year gap after furnishing the school, as the student need to relax and conditioned the stress, he or she takes during the exam to completed the learning with good grades. In addition to that, qualifying the school makes the student very much qualified to gain his career and he may start his career as fresher to any industry where he is eligible to work. This is a golden chance to start early and gain work experience.

Last but not least, holiday for a year after completing the school helps the student to experience the world and understand better to see further opportunities to grow and also provide chance to think where the student must work. This how it will result in student gets relief from studies.

On the contrary, taking year off has its disadvantages also. In contrast to exploring the world in last paragraph, can give full room to be lost from the right path of living life and can indulge himself or herself in illegal activities. What is more, the student may decide to not proceed for higher education. finally, the student can join tertiary education which will take it away from academic education. Thus, it produces more less qualified and able person for high onus position.

To sum up, the advantages of taking a year gap will lead to curb the aspirant's possible chances to grow academically for handling the more responsible jobs. This how essay reflects that taking a year gap outweigh the the advantages of continuous studies

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Vishal AnandThe following essay takes a look at both sides.

Improper thesis statement.

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It is worth considering a year gap after furnishing the school, as the student need to relax and conditioned the stress, he or she takes during the exam to completed the learning with good grades. In addition to that, qualifying the school makes the student very much qualified to gain his career and he may start his career as fresher to any industry where he is eligible to work. This is a golden chance to start early and gain work experience.

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Hi online angel


It would have been so good if you would have told me the what is wrong in the words for ex. spelling


second yes the word "furnishing " was mistyped


Third I am preparing the Writing Essays for IELTS and there is 99.7 % essays where writer has to present his opinion or what the writer believes about the subject etc.



Please tell, is that still wrong if it is written with consideration of IELTS.


If not please tell how to write ielts introduction.

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Vishal Anandbetween finishing the school

Delete the red part because you are not mentioning a particular school. You write either finishing school or leaving school, in British English. You can choose.