Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people But while it may offer some advantages it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have differing views with regard to the question of wherther studying abroad is goof for students or not. While I tend to towards the viewpoint that students face multiple difficulties when going overseas for university study like inevitable encounters and studying in a different culture.

On the one hand, it can’t be denied that students have to deal with many issues which derive from the differences among cultures. Most students can face culture shock. It includes the shock of a new environment, the way people dress, speak and behave. It also includes the shock of being separated from familiar things or important people in your life maybe family, friends. It can take students a long time to get used to it at first. What’s more, as you have to meet many people from a wide range of cultures, sometimes encounters can occur due to the differently traditional thoughts. To use a common example of this practice, a fight may break out if you break spaghetti into pieces in front of an Italian.

On the other hand, there are clear arguments supporting studying abroad since there are several advantages of studying overseas. Obviously, going overseas for study make you become more independent and also improve your social skills especially problem-solving. Moreover, you will have more opportunities to make friends with people from all over the world or build bridges with potential costumers for your future jobs or your own business. Last but not least, studying abroad inevitably improve your knowledge by helping you watch the world and opening your view . You can learn from brand new cultures and gain amazing experiences by working and studying here cause each environment has its rules which you have to work hard to get up with.

In conclusion, it seems to me that studying abroad is an exciting and worthy way as its potential effect on our future.

People have differing different (I think using 'different' is more appropriate) views with regard to the question of wherther whether studying abroad is goof for students or not. While I tend to towards (When using 'while', there should be 2 clauses : While ...., I believe ....) I am of the viewpoint that students face multiple difficulties when going overseas for university study like inevitable encounters and studying in a different culture.

On the one hand, it can’t cannot be denied that students have to deal with many issues which derive from the differences among cultures. Most students can may face culture shock. It includes including the shock of a new environment, the way native people dress, speak and behave. It also includes the shock of being separated from familiar things or important people in your life maybe such as family,and friends. It can take students a long time to get used to it (what does 'it' present?) the new culture at first. What’s more, as you have to meet many people from a wide range of cultures, sometimes encounters (what do you mean by using 'encounter'?) can occur due to the differently traditional thoughts. To use a common example of this practice, a fight may break out if you break spaghetti into pieces in front of an Italian.(you should explain why?, possibly because this behaviour is considered rude or offensive to the Italians?)

On the other hand, there are clear arguments supporting studying abroad since there are several advantages of studying overseas.this can brings students several advantages. Obviously, going overseas for study makes you (you should not use 'you', instead, use 'the students') become more independent and also improves your their social skills, especially problem-solving. Moreover, you they will have more opportunities to make friends with people from all over the world or build bridges with potential costumers (you mean 'customers'?)for your their future jobs or your their own business. Last but not least, studying abroad inevitably improves your the students' knowledge by helping you watch the world (this is not a good expression) and opening your their view . You can learn from brand new cultures and gain amazing experiences by working and studying here cause (you mean 'because'?) each environment has its rules which you have to work hard to get up with.

In conclusion, it seems to me that studying abroad is an exciting and worthy way as its potential effect on our future. (It is too short to be seen as a conclusion)

papaya gray 446People have differing different (I think using 'different' is more appropriate)

Differing is very good.

papaya gray 446is goof for students or not.

Should be "good" not "goof"

papaya gray 446It includes including the shock of a new environment, the way native people dress, speak and behave.

...including the shock of a new environment and the way people dress, speak and behave.

papaya gray 446 What’s more, as you have to meet many people from a wide range of cultures, sometimes encounters (what do you mean by using 'encounter'?) can occur due to the differently traditional thoughts.

What is more, as you have to meet many people from a wide range of cultures, sometimes violent encounters can occur due to the clashing attitudes or moral values.

papaya gray 446On the other hand, there are clear arguments supporting studying abroad since there are several advantages of studying overseas.this can brings students several advantages.

On the other hand, there are clear arguments supporting studying abroad since there are several advantages of studying overseas.

papaya gray 446 Obviously, going overseas for study makes you (you should not use 'you', instead, use 'the students')

There is nothing wrong with "you" as long as it is used consistently.

There are other issues with the original essay, but it is quite awkward to correct both the original and the the incorrect corrections given by papaya gray.



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People have differing views with regard to the question of wherther studying abroad is goof for students or not. (Your opening sentence seems like a memorized response. Examiners do not reward memorized text. Write a sentence that convinces the examiner that you understand the topic.) While I tend to towards the viewpoint that students face multiple difficulties when going overseas for university study like such as disputes with the local people inevitable encounters and studying in a different culture.

On the one hand, it can’t be denied that (Avoid these dummy-it clauses. They add nothing to the essay.) students have to deal with many issues which derive from the differences among cultures. Most students will can face culture shock. It includes the shock of a new environment, and the way people dress, speak and behave. It also includes the shock of being separated from familiar things or important people in their lives - their your life maybe family and friends. It can take students a long time to get used to it at first. What’s is more, as they you (refers to the students) have to meet many people from a wide range of cultures, sometimes violent encounters can occur due to the differences in beliefs about what is right and wrong. differently traditional thoughts. (wrong phrase) To use a common example of this practice, a fight may break out if you break spaghetti into pieces in front of an Italian.

On the other hand, there are clear arguments supporting studying abroad since there are several advantages of studying overseas. (repetitive) Obviously, the experience going overseas for study (repetitive) make (wrong form) you become more independent and also improve your social skills especially and problem-solving skills. Moreover, you will have more opportunities to make friends with people from all over the world or build bridges with potential costumers for your future jobs or your own business. Last but not least, studying abroad inevitably improve (wrong form) your knowledge by letting you observe another part of helping you watch the world and opening your mind to other ideas. view . You can learn from brand new the cultures you come into contact with and gain amazing experiences by working and studying here cause each environment has its rules which you have to get used to. work hard to get up with.

In conclusion, it seems to me that studying abroad is an exciting and worthy way as its potential effect on our future.