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Your neighbor has a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep due to this.

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:

  • describe the problem with the dog
  • explain why it is important for you to sleep
  • outline what your neighbor could do about the situation

Dear Mr. Johns,

I am writing this letter to complain about your dog who has created numerous problems for the whole society.

Whenever he sees people around him, he growls repeatedly. Moreover, he barks at night, particularly in midnight when everyone is sleeping.

Getting proper sleep is crucial for everyone in order to work effectively. I am a professor in Cardiff University and suffering from multiple diseases, such as high blood pressure and migraine. A frequent sleep disorder due to your dog’s barking has increased my illnesses manifold. Also, I am not able to focus on teaching as a result of stress.

I want you to immediately take action on this issue. You should either train your dog to remain silent at nights or give him sleeping pills. If you want, I can give you the contact details of institutes that provide various trainings to pets.

I await your response.

Yours sincerely,

Chris Smith

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weak in englishI am writing this letter to complain about your dog who has created numerous problems for the whole society.

You can include the blue part but, it's a bit strong. It could be better to start with words that seem less confrontational. You can choose.


The yellow part is strange. It would be better to use area or neighbourhood instead.

weak in englishparticularly in midnight

Replace it with at.

weak in englishmigraine.

Migraines, because you are mentioning them in general.