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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay

The bar chart displays the world pineapple exports produced by the top three countries in 2009 and 2019. Meanwhile, the pie chart gives information about the breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
Overall, the export of country A peaked highest at more than ten metric tonnes of pineapple in 2019. Additionally, 35% of the cost breakdown of each pineapple in the three countries was for distribution along with retail.
As can be seen, world pineapple exports in 2019 were quite slightly with two remains, just less than two metric tonnes, and even nearly zero regard to country C. Back then a decade, the exports were fewer while the largest was just 4,4 metric tonnes of country B.
Getting to the pie chart, it can be observed that the cost came from several factors. The second with the percentage reach highs of 18% was profit and the latter were taxes, international transport, import licenses respectively and so on. Meantime, the smallest proportion was export costs which up to 4%.

The bar chart displays the world pineapple exports (What are the units of measure? Number of pineapples?) produced by the top three countries in 2009 and 2019. Meanwhile, the pie chart gives information about (That is too vague and non-specific) the a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. (How many categories?)


Overall, the exports of country A peaked (wrong word - you cannot see peaks on this bar chart.) ) highest at more than ten metric tonnes of pineapple in 2019. Additionally, 35% of the cost breakdown of each pineapple in the three countries (That is not correct.) was for distribution along with retail. (Use the correct names.)
As can be seen, (Do not write clauses with no information content.) world pineapple exports in 2019 were quite slightly with two remains, (That makes no sense. Poor English) just less than two metric tonnes, and even nearly zero regard (wrong expression) to country C. Back then a decade, (wrong expression) the exports were fewer while the largest was just 4,4 metric tonnes of country B.
Getting to the pie chart, it can be observed that (Just describe the information. Read my advice.) the cost came from several factors. The second with the percentage reach highs (That makes no sense. Poor English) of 18% was profit and the latter were taxes, international transport, import licenses respectively and so on. (The reader has no idea what you mean.) Meantime, the smallest proportion was export costs which up to 4%. (wrong expression).


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