Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


It is argued that people's health has suffered from many issues because of a huge amount of sugary consumption of drinks as well as food. Some individuals believe that the prices of these products must be higher in order to reduce consumers. This essay agrees with their idea because it makes our life better and increases awareness of everyone about healthcare.

If companies increase the prices of these kinds of products, the consumption will be inclined. The less consumption we get the fewer levels of sugar in our body. This means people can restrict to get many diseases and it also helps us to have a healthier body. For example, in Vietnam, because of the low price of cigarettes, almost 70% of residents smoke them which leads to a huge proportion of people who suffer from lung cancer.

The expensive prices also educate and make people consider the products that they will buy. Because before people spend a big amount of money on something, they tend to think about the value of it and whether it is worth for them to buy. For example, experts had an experiment that between a cheap and an expensive food stall, people in the former only chose one and immediately paid for it, while most people in the other stall would look at the information on product's packaging to check ingredients, introductions, expiry date before they bought.

In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that food and drink products that contain high levels of sugar are necessary to be made more expensive because it helps more and more people stay healthier and be more considerable.

It is argued that people's health has suffered from many issues because of drinking too many a huge amount of ("huge" and "big" are words for baby books. Avoid them in academic essays.) sugary consumption (The drinks are sugary, not the consumption) of drinks as well as eating a lot of high-sugar food. Some individuals believe that the prices of these products must be higher in order to reduce consumption. consumers. (The consumer is the person - You do not want to reduce a person.) This essay (Do not mention your essay. You have the opinion.) I agree with their idea because it makes our life better and increases awareness of everyone's awareness about healthcare.

If companies increase the prices of these kinds of products, the consumption will be inclined. (wrong word) The less consumption sugar we consume, get the fewer lower the level of sugar in our body will be. This means people can restrict to get will be less likely to get many diseases and it also helps us to have a healthier body. For example, in Vietnam, because of the low price of cigarettes, almost 70% of residents smoke them which leads to a significant huge proportion of people who suffer from lung cancer. (That is a very good example.)

The expensive high prices (A Rolex watch is expensive. A Ferrari race car is expensive. The latest iPhone is expensive. Prices are not expensive - we cannot buy a price.) also educate and make people consider the products that they will buy. Because before people spend a big large amount of money on something, they tend to think about the value of it and whether it is worth buying. for them to buy. For example, experts had an experiment in which they observed the difference in people's behavior between a cheap and an expensive food stall. People in the former would only chose one and immediately pay paid for it, while most people in the other stall would look at the information on product's packaging to check ingredients, description and introductions, expiry date before they bought anything.

In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that (Never mention your essay. Do not use the word "essay" in an IELTS Task 1 or Task 2.) food and drink products that contain high levels of sugar are necessary to be made more expensive because it helps more and more people stay healthier and be more thoughtful about what they eat. considerable.

Thank you so much. It's really helpful. After reviewing, I realized that I didn't develop ideas well. In the beginning, I outlined 2 main ideas: make life better and increase awareness, but the second body paragraph is really beside the point Emotion: sad It emphasizes more about money. I don't know how to rate my score, would you mind scoring it, please?

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