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Topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer – based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

My essay :

Due to the development of the world, people are more contingent on computer artificial intelligence. While I believe that it will offer more benefits in the future, there are significant drawbacks if we rely excessively on computers.

On the one hand, it is obvious that computer - based technology has made human life become more convenient and simple to accomplish everything. Therefore, there is no doubt that humanity will become increasingly reliant on technological intelligence. In particular, in the next several years, scientists will develop a wide range of computing devices and machines such as driverless cars, robots or artificial synapse to take care of human life. Thus, not so far, human civilization will become a place where everything based on technology to grow and maintain, any difficulty in our lives could be easily handled.

In contrast, although there are many advantages of basing on artificial computer technology, numerous disadvantages happens if we use it inconsequentially. Firstly, the overweight reliance on computers has a negative impact on people's health. Spending too much time on computers can result in addiction to them and lead to mental health issues. For example, if you dip into artificial technology for a long period of time, it's a metaphor living in a virtual world with just your imaginations, separation from real life. Secondly, human's social relationships and living skills will be restricted and faded with time if we waste all our time for computers. Therefore, we will have to live alone for the rest of our lives with bad consequences on ourselves.

In conclusion, artificial computer technology has brought to human lives certain positive changes. However, people should not depend so much on computers to the point of losing themselves.

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Due to the development of the world, (That makes no sense. What does "development of the world" mean? ) people are more contingent (wrong word - you have not used this word correctly.) on computer artificial intelligence. (That is not the essay topic. ) While I believe that it will offer more benefits in the future, there are significant drawbacks if we rely excessively on computers.

On the one hand, it is obvious that computer - based (No spaces next to hyphens.) technology has made our lives better in that human life become more convenient and many tasks are easier to do. simple to accomplish everything. Therefore, there is no doubt that humanity (wrong word) we will become increasingly reliant on it. technological intelligence. (wrong expression.) In particular, in the next several years, scientists will develop a wide range of computing devices and machines such as driverless cars, robots or artificial synapse to take care of human life. (I do not know what you mean. ) Thus, not so far, human civilization will become a place where everything based on technology to grow and maintain, (I do not understand your argument. Please give examples from your personal experience.) any difficulty in our lives could be easily handled.

In contrast, although there are many advantages of basing on artificial computer technology, numerous disadvantages happens if we use it inconsequentially. Firstly, First, the overweight (wrong expression) overreliance on computers has a negative impact on people's health. Spending too much time on computers can result in addiction to them and lead to mental health issues. For example, if you dip into artificial technology (That does not make sense.) for a long period of time, it's (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) a metaphor living in a virtual world with just your imaginations, (This does not seem to be related to robots and driverless cars, or even artificial synapses. How is it bad if we have self-driving cars and robots to wash our dishes and clean our homes?) separation from real life. Secondly, Second, our human's social relationships and living skills will be restricted and faded with time if we waste all our time for computers. Therefore, we will have to live alone for the rest of our lives (I do not understand your point at all.) with bad consequences on ourselves.

In conclusion, artificial computer technology (Computer technology is real. It is not artificial.) has brought to human lives us certain positive changes. However, people should not depend so much on computers to the point of losing themselves.


I did not really understand your essay. You did not really cover the topic well.

How dependent are we on computer technology today? How will this be change in the future? Is it possible that we will be too reliant on this kind of technology in the future?

It is not about addiction to video games and virtual reality. It is about doing routine tasks in our lives.

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Writing task 2 – Science and Technology

Topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer – based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

My essay :

Due to the development of the world, people are more contingent on computer artificial intelligence. While I believe that it will offer more benefits in the future, there are significant drawbacks if we rely excessively on computers.

On the one hand, it is obvious that computer - based technology has made human life become more convenient and simple to accomplish everything. Therefore, there is no doubt that humanity will become increasingly reliant on technological intelligence. In particular, in the next several years, scientists will develop a wide range of computing devices and machines such as driverless cars, robots or artificial synapse to take care of human life. Thus, not so far, human civilization will become a place where everything based on technology to grow and maintain, any difficulty in our lives could be easily handled.

In contrast, although there are many advantages of basing on artificial computer technology, numerous disadvantages happens if we use it inconsequentially. Firstly, the overweight reliance on computers has a negative impact on people's health. Spending too much time on computers can result in addiction to them and lead to mental health issues. For example, if you dip into artificial technology for a long period of time, it's a metaphor living in a virtual world with just your imaginations, separation from real life. Secondly, human's social relationships and living skills will be restricted and faded with time if we waste all our time for computers. Therefore, we will have to live alone for the rest of our lives with bad consequences on ourselves.

In conclusion, artificial computer technology has brought to human lives certain positive changes. However, people should not depend so much on computers to the point of losing themselves.

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