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Typhoon is a mature tropical cyclone which develops in the Northwestern Pacific Basin, Northern Hemisphere. In Vietnam, typhoons occur frequently. The major of storms form from June to November. On average, they happen about 3 - 4 times a year. The hardest hit regions are Northeast and North Central Coast. Typhoons often start with a pouring rain accompanies with gales. They cause a large amount of terible destruction such as flooded areas, mudslides or proverty damage. They also make hundreds of people die and homeless. To help people in these areas, volunteers come here and provide them food, drink, medical supplies, clothes.
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[ 1] A typhoon is a mature tropical cyclone which develops in the northwestern Pacific basin, in the northern hemisphere. In Vietnam, typhoons occur frequently. The [ 2] majority of such storms form from June to November. On average, they happen about [ 3] 3-4 times a year. [ 4] The hardest-hit regions are the northeast and north-central coast. Typhoons often start with [ 5] a pouring rain accompanies with accompanied by gales. They cause a large amount of terrible destruction, such as widespread flooding, flooded areas, mudslides, or proverty and property damage. They also make kill hundreds of people, die and make a large number homeless. To help people in these areas, volunteers come here go there and provide them food, drink, clean water, medical supplies, [ 6] and clothes.

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[ 1]: “typhoon” is a countable noun, so it needs an article.

[ 2]: “major” is an adjective. You need the noun form there.

[ 3]: No space between the dashes.

[ 4]: Note the hyphenation.

[ 5]: No “a”.

[ 6]: We always use “and” or “or” before the last item in a list.