Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about studying a foreign language. While some would argue that travelling and working in a different nation is the only purpose, I still believe that there are more underlying purposes to studying another language.
There are several reasons why people might think studying a different language is just for migrating overseas in search of work or getting away for holidays. First, it is a common thought for people who are bilingual, as they are able to visit various nations in which a lot of dissimilar languages are spoken without difficulty. In fact, they are more likely to experience more new things such as cultural differences, local speciality easier as they can communicate to native residents. By learning a foreign language, moreover, people who know more than their mother tounge could get a good job, which are flexible and multi-skilled positions quickly.
In spite of above arguements, I support the idea that there are a variety of intentions why more and more people want to be multibilingual. First, most well-known books are in English or Spainish or Japanese. Take “ Harry Potter” is a case in point, which provided a wide range of imagination. This means, bilingual people can broaden their knowledge through books which help them connect with the culture of the books. Second, if someone can use more than monolingual, they are enable to widen their friend zones. For example, my sister works in an English center, she makes many foreign friends than me.
In conclusion, it is commonly believed that people learn another language except their mother tounge for a conventional aim. I think there are diverse aims for that.
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People have different views about the motivation for studying a foreign language. While some would argue that travelling and working in a different nation (You wrote two reasons, not one.) are the only reasons, is the only purpose, I still believe that there are more underlying purposes for studying another language.
Some argue that the only two reasons for studying a foreign language are for travelling abroad or getting a job in in an international company. However, I believe that there are a wide variety of reasons that motivate people to become fluent in other languages, such as being able to read books not in translation, but as the original author wrote them.
There are several reasons why people might think studying a different language is just for employment migrating overseas in search of work or getting away for the holidays. First, it is a common thought for (unnatural) people who are bilingual, as they are able to visit various nations where that second language is spoken in which a lot of dissimilar languages are spoken (Bilingual means knowing two languages, your native language and one more. It is not "a lot of languages" What you wrote does not make any sense). without difficulty. In fact, they are more likely to experience more new things such as cultural differences, local speciality (You did not fix your two mistakes. Do you know how we write more than one thing in a list?
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He likes apples, pears. (This is wrong!)
He likes apples and pears. (This is correct.)
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They will experience cultural differences, local specialties. (This is wrong!)
They will experience cultural differences and local specialties. (This is correct.)
When you write a list or series of items, you must use a conjunction.
easier as they can communicate to (Wrong word. See my previous correction.) native residents. By learning a foreign language, moreover, people who know more than their mother tounge That is not a valid English word. Find the word you are looking for in a dictionary. ) could get a good job, which are flexible and multi-skilled positions quickly.
In spite of above arguements,(Same mistake as before.) I support the idea that (Delete. Do not write your views in the body paragraphs. ) there are a variety of intentions why more and more people want to be multibilingual. (Same mistake as before. This is not a valid English word! The adjectives are 1) monolingual (one language only), 2) bilingual (two languages), 3) trilingual (three languages) and 4) multilingual (many languages.). ) First, most well-known popular books are written in English or Spainish (Same mistake as before.) or Japanese. Take “ Harry Potter” is a case in point, which provided a wide range of imagination. (Same mistake as before. Changing "Gone with the Wind" to "Harry Potter" did not fix the mistakes of grammar. This is not grammatical English. Read my previous comment. If you do not understand your mistake, please ask.) This means, bilingual people can broaden their knowledge through books which help them connect with the culture of the author. the books. (Same mistake as before.) Second, if someone can use more than monolingual, (wrong word) one language, they are enable able to widen their friend zones. (wrong phrase - you did not fix this mistake. ) circle of friends. For example, my sister works in an English center, (Same mistake as before. This is a comma splice error. It is ungrammatical to join two sentences with a comma. ) she makes many more foreign friends than me.
In conclusion, (Your conclusion is very bad English. ) it is commonly believed that people learn another language except their mother tounge for a conventional aim. I think there are diverse aims for that.
In conclusion, I believe that people study foreign languages for a variety of reasons. Although the primary ones are for employment and travel abroad, there are others such as establishing a network of friends around the world and reading books in their original language.
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