Hello, this is me, Elysia Ng. again 😁 I have written on this topic for days and been trying to fix my unnatural style of writing. Please have a look at the essay. I hope I won't be too casual or sound awkward this time.

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The topic:

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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My essay:


Due to the expensive cost of living in today's world, people usually have to deal with several problems concerning job dissatisfaction and low financial status. However, the actual matter is whether or not they should find a way to improve their current situation. In my opinion, any efforts made to improve the quality of life are encouraged.


People tend to sleep better at night when their inclination is to agree with fate. The acceptance of negative things happening in life, namely lack of money and lack of job satisfaction, will have people pay less attention to their performances in the workplace. Despite tedious days at work, workers do not quit the job because it assures them of employment. Therefore, they can make ends meet every month. Moreover, there are no worries about losing it all if people have already withdrawn the intention to change their lives through risky investments. To clarify, farmers borrowed a large sum of money to expand crop areas in the hope of greater yields but finally have to shoulder debts due to crop failures.


However, life has to create constant challenges for individuals to acquire their better versions. In other words, experiencing hard times will help individuals define themselves once they have succeeded in overcoming adverse circumstances. Escaping the inactive lifestyle, switching jobs, and stepping out of the comfort zone to take opportunities that may only come once, could probably bring enthusiasm and prosperity to work and later life. For example, one of my aunts gave up her low-income blue-collar job to start a business in cosmetics retailing and has successfully improved her living standards.


To conclude, although it can be easier to ignore and live with the adversity, I would like to restate my position that people had better make positive changes to their lives instead of leaving it for fate to decide.

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Thank you.

Due to the expensive high cost of living in today's world, people usually have to deal with several problems concerning job dissatisfaction and a lack of money. low financial status. (Not a good expression.) However, the actual matter is whether or not they should find a way to improve their current situation. In my opinion, any efforts made to improve the quality of life are encouraged.


Use "expensive" correctly.

A Mercedes Benz is an expensive car.
She is wearing an expensive Rolex watch.
That shop is a boutique; it sells expensive purses and jewelry.

You cannot buy "cost". Costs can be high or low, but they are not expensive.



People tend to sleep better at night when their inclination is to accept their agree with fate. The acceptance of negative things happening in life, namely lack of money and lack of job dissatisfaction, will have result in people paying less attention to their performances (wrong form) in the workplace. Despite tedious days at work, workers do not quit the job because it assures them of a steady income. employment. Therefore, they can make ends meet every month. Moreover, there are no worries about losing it all if people are cautious and do not attempt have already withdrawn the intention to change their lives through risky investments. To clarify, A counterexample is farmers who borrow borrowed a large sum of money to plant a larger area to expand crop areas in the hope of greater yields but finally suffer financial ruin have to shoulder debts due to crop failures.


However, life has to create constant challenges for individuals to improve themselves. acquire their better versions. In other words, experiencing hard times will help individuals define themselves once they have succeeded in overcoming adverse circumstances. Escaping the an inactive lifestyle, switching jobs, and stepping out of the one's comfort zone to take opportunities that may only come once, could probably bring enthusiasm and prosperity to work and later life. For example, one of my aunts gave up her low-income blue-collar job to start a business in cosmetics retailing and has successfully raised improved her living standards.


To conclude, although it can be easier to (better: just be resigned) ignore and live with the adversity, I would like to restate my position that people had better make positive changes to their lives instead of leaving it for fate to decide.