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Topic : Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
➡While many argue that the countryside provide better conditions rather than cities, others agree that we should live in a large metropolis that brings us beneficial health care. I firmly believe that villages could bring about predominantly advantageous to humans health.

On the one hand, there are some undeniable merits of city life. City dwellers are close to amenities, particularly hospitals or private consulting rooms. This means that in emergency situations, it is safer and quicker for patients to make a call for help then the ambulance can take them to the hospital immediately. In addition, by technical assistance and a wealth of proficient doctors, the patient could be treated by advanced methods.

In spite of the above arguments, I am more in favour of settling in the countryside. A place which has fresh air and picturesque landscapes such as green rice fields and crystal clear rivers is an ideal to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city. Without the rush hour and traffic congestion, people can mitigate not only a higher risk of stress and depression but also lung disorders and asthma. I believe that the mature, especially the elderly prefer immersing themselves in peaceful sightseeing to participating in lavish parties.

To conclude, it is important for people to find the best place to take care of themselves either the suburbs or a metropolis. I would always agree that the standard of living in villages is healthier.
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While many argue that the countryside provide (wrong form) better conditions for healthy living rather than cities, others agree assert that we should live in a large metropolis where there are better that brings us beneficial health care facilities. I firmly believe that villages could bring about predominantly advantageous (wrong word - advantageous is an adjective. You cannot use it like a noun.) to humans (wrong form) health.

(The underlined part of the sentence is very awkward and unnatural. Here is a better thesis statement for your essay.

I firmly believe that villages are the ideal place to live if one wants a long and healthy life because of the fresh air and friendly neighbors.

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On the one hand, there are some undeniable merits of city life. City dwellers are close to amenities, (wrong word) health care providers, particularly hospitals or private consulting rooms. This means that in emergency situations, it is safer and quicker for people in need patients (wrong word. A patient is someone being treated in a hospital or by a physician.) to make a call for help. Then (run-on sentence) the ambulance can take them to the hospital immediately. In addition, (wrong transition phrase.) by Since urban hospitals have advanced technology and technical assistance and a wealth of proficient doctors, the patient could be treated effectively. by advanced methods.

In spite of the above arguments, I am more in favour of settling in the countryside. A place which has fresh air and picturesque landscapes such as green rice fields and crystal clear rivers is an ideal to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city. Without the rush hour and traffic congestion, people can avoid mitigate not only a the higher risk of stress and depression but also lung disorders and asthma. I believe that the mature, especially the elderly prefer immersing themselves in a peaceful and serene place sightseeing (wrong word) to participating in lavish parties.

To conclude, it is important for people to find the best place to take care of themselves and in my opinion, that is either the suburbs or a metropolis. I would always agree that Besides, the standard of living in villages is more amenable to good health. healthier.