Topic: Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Computer learning is among the most important subjects for students. As a matter of facts, this topic is considered mandatory in most schools in the world. The necessities of computer educating and some points of view about daily interaction with technology will be stated in this essay.

Due to the development of technology, human life is changing rapidly. To compete wit the dramatic growth of automation, people should provide themselves with fulfilled knowledge. I highly recommend that every schools serve computer education as a compulsory subject for two reasons. Firstly, computer learning is able to expand student's insight in technology. For instance, until the year 2020, almost every cities in Vietnam has an average of 40% of learners who are taught information technology so that young-aged students can have interest in investing the endless functions of computers. Secondly, most of the students can also have access to online teaching and learning applications in order not to pause studying through the pandemic. This concept is convenient since it has the ability to reach to remote areas.

On the other hand, students from all ages can easily reach out for technology devices and learn computer skills themselves. This should not be forbiddened, however, parents must take control of their children's behaviour because the network may contain inappropriate contents.

In conclusion, picking up knowledge of conputer is crucial. New generation must enrich themselves by advancing their recognition.


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Learning to use a computer learning (Computer learning suggests that the computer is learning something.) is among the most important subjects for students. As a matter of facts,(wrong form) this topic is considered mandatory in most schools in the world. The necessities of computer educating (wrong phrase) and some points of view about daily interaction with technology will be stated in this essay.

Never mention your essay. Write a thesis statement - that is the main point of your essay. The examiner knows you are going to write about daily uses of a computer - that is the instructions. Do not tell them what they know.


Due to the development of technology, (poor phrase. Technology development started more than 200,000 years ago when homo sapiens invented stone tools.) human life (wrong phrase. Do not use the word "human" except when comparing with other biological species or is some set phrases.) is changing rapidly. To compete wit (wrong word) the dramatic growth of automation, people should provide themselves with fulfilled knowledge. (wrong phrase - knowledge is what you know. "Fulfilled knowledge" does not make sense. ) I highly recommend that (Put your opinion in your thesis statement, not in a body paragraph. The body paragraphs support your opinion. ) every schools serve computer education as a compulsory subject for two reasons. Firstly, First, computer learning is able to expand student's insight in technology. For instance, until the year 2020, almost every cities (wrong form) in Vietnam has an average of 40% of learners who are taught information technology so that young-aged (wrong expression ) students can have interest in investing (wrong word) the endless functions of computers. Secondly, Second, most of the students can also have access to online lectures and classes from home teaching and learning applications in order not to pause studying through the pandemic. This concept (wrong word) The virtual classroom can also be convenient for some students since it has the ability to reach to remote areas.

On the other hand, students from all ages can easily reach out for technology devices (not a good expression) and learn computer skills themselves. This should not be forbiddened, (wrong spelling and comma splice error) however, parents must take control of their children's behaviour because the network (wrong word) may contain inappropriate contents. (wrong form)

In conclusion, picking up knowledge of conputer is crucial. New generation must enrich themselves by advancing their recognition. (wrong word.)


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