The two illustrations describe the changes and developments in the facilities of an island for tourism.

As exhibited in the maps, more accommodations and other buildings have been constructed in the middle of the area. In the outside part, they also built a pier and added some surrounding boats.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, numerous houses with circle footpaths have been added to fulfill the empty land in both Westside and Northside. In the center, architects built a reception which was inside a round vehicle traffic leading to the restaurant in the North and the pier in the South. Besides,a number of plants and trees were still remained in their previous places. In the ocean, beach also has a path to go in and been upgraded into a place for swimming to attract more people. On the other side, they purchased for more boats and placed a pier for tourist to access the area.

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The two illustrations pictures describe the changes and developments in the facilities of that took place on an island after some facilities were built for tourism.

As exhibited shown in the diagrams, maps, more accommodation and other buildings have been were constructed in the middle of the island. area. In the outside part, In the south of that island, they also built a pier and added some surrounding as a boating facility for visitors.

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In the western part of the island near the north shore, a new restaurant was built.

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The pictures comparison changes and developments that took place on an island after some facilities were built for tourism.

As shown in the diagram, more accommodations and other buildings were constructed in the middle of the island. In the South of the island, they also built a pier as boating facilities for visitors.

To be more specific, they build two separate accommodations in Westside and Eastside. Each of them arranged around a circular footpath. In the north, a restaurant was then constructed and followed by a vehicle track leading to the reception in the center of the island. The pier also connected with the reception by a vehicle track.Besides, new boats were placed near the pier for a safer access to the island.Subsequently, a number of trees occupied in the same places in the west and the north parts. As for the beach, they opened an area for swimming and erected a footpath directed to it.

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The two pictures describe the changes and developments that took place on an island after some facilities were built for tourism.

As shown in the diagrams, more accommodation and other buildings were constructed in the middle of the island. In the south of that island, they also built a pier as a boating facility for visitors.

In the western part of the island, near the north shore, a restaurant was built, and a new reception centre was constructed south of the restaurant. Moreover, two rows of chalets were built in the area to the west of the restaurant and reception. Some of the island’s original palm trees remain standing in the middle of that accommodation area. East of the reception centre, a larger lot of chalets was built, in a circular layout. Furthermore, a pier with boating facilities was built on the southern shore of the island.

Finally, a new vehicular track connecting the restaurant, reception and pier was constructed, in addition to walking tracks that provide access to the chalets and the various amenities on the island, including the beach on the western tip.

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