I'm writing a Shakespearean sonnet for English class and I need help. Please help me.

Sonnet-

Sometimes my love does not feel like it's love,

But love will never leave my hearty soul.

For love is purer than the purest dove,

And love will lead me to my final goal.

A soul of love does not go well with fire.

My love will burn down your guard house of hate.

Your hate will make you be a hated liar.

Our feud of love is not up for debate.

A feud of such will never end in the near,

'Cause love and hate will never go away.

And this will only end by facing fear,

For fear will come on it's own fateful day.

I hope this feud will end by-and-by.

The prince wants love but our hate will not die.


So, that's my Shakespearean sonnet. It's supposed to be based off of Romeo and Juliet. Please comment and tell me what corrections I should make. Thanks

Maddie

The iambic pentameter is a little off, Maddie. The red is to repair it. Other corrections are underlined.


Sometimes my love feels not like it is love,

But love will never leave my hearty soul*.

For love is purer than the purest dove,

And love will lead me to my final goal.

A soul of love does not go well with fire.

My love will burn your guarded house of hate.

Your hate will make you be a hated liar.

Our feud of love is not up for debate.

A feud on such will never end so near,

'Cause love and hate will never go away.

And this will only end by facing fear,

For fear will come on its own fateful day.

I hope this feud will finish by and by.

The prince wants love but hate will never die.


'Hearty soul' is rather silly.

Thank you. I'll take these into consideration while editing my final project.